I think you might not know how twine works but it doesn't have a built in spell check so checking for mistakes can be quite hard. Maybe an idea to pitch is potentially copying what was put in twine and pasting it in a word or google doc and see what those spell checkers think,
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Its that time again, making predictions. I made the gen 5 predictions a while ago and kept them in my back pocket, so seeing them again I can say... wow finding pairings was hard, but I shall try anyways. (Note: I make the assumption that the Forces of Nature are paired though that might have been confirmed in a previous comment there is too many to scan through)
Part 1:
Cobalion and Caitlin: Seems like an odd pairing but in BW2, Cobalion is said to be found on route 13, right next Undella Town where Caitlin lives. Perhaps this princess saw this Pokemon of legend strolling outside of town and now demands we fetch it for her. After this of course we can (Insert my large Undella Town side scene rant here).
Terrakion and Shauntal: Another strange pairing but Shauntal being a writer on other trainers, perhaps she simply issues this as a challenge in order to document our tale of poke breeding.
Virizion and Elesa: I know it seems like it would make sense for Elesa to get Thundurus, but because they're getting grouped there is a better candidate. Virizion isn't close to Elesa location wise either, this is purely a vibes choise. Elesa being a supermodel and Virizion giving off more feminine vibes then the other swords, perhaps it is Elesa feeling her grace being challenged by Virizion. This is like the Cheryl pairing last time, mainly vibes.
Forces of Nature (+ Enamorus) and Skyla: yeah you need 4 pokemon (in 2 segments) to get Skyla but... flying types and flying type trainer simple as. Also Skyla thicc af so honestly seems worth the effort.
Victini and Hilda/Rosa: One of the two female PCs want to see the victory pokemon. Issue is I can't say which one wants Victini since they are PC's and similar in character design honestly. Still this just makes a lot of sense overall.
Keldeo and Hilda/Rosa: This one doesn't really have explanation other than pairing is needed and PC seems important enough to get mythical.
Maybe Part 2 (these Pokémon could be in part 1 but having them in part 2 will be more of a balance of amount of content added)
Meloetta and Roxie: MUSIC, Im pretty sure someone left a comment pitching this which got a thumbs up from Chainsaw so let the obvious connection be obvious.
Genesect and Lenora: Lenora is a museum curator, Genesect is a Pokemon revived from ancient times and forcibly made into a machine because of a spiteful scientist. I think it makes sense for the curator of a museum to want to see such a pokemon.
Part 2 for sures (will be in part 2 and not part 1)
Reshiram/Zekrom and Bianca/Iris: I will expand on this thought in the next pair.
Kyurem and Juniper: So Juniper is the first female scientist we bump into on this journey, a friend of Maple most likely. I think that she wants us to capture Kyurem so she can do some studying of Kyurem, which we would need Reshiram and Zekrom for. Bianca is Junipers research assistant, likely rewarding us for find either one of both, Iris being the champion (I assume we in BW2) and a dragon type trainer would also like to see these two legendary dragons. So perhaps Bianca and Iris have the same requirement of getting Reshiram AND Zekrom, but both have different motives, one for research and the other out of curiosity.
Those are my predictions for Unova, Chainsaw is free to copy any of these ideas if needed and im excited to see what comes next.
Hello, I have finally been able to play this game again thanks to it being put online. The positive feelings I held for it before issues are now back and I can't wait to get farther in. What I will warn here though is that the Kim Hook-up is extremely missable because I accidentally progressed too far in the Ms. Mariano story so she is only around downtown at night.
If its possible for her to be in the park during the day and the downtown at night in order for people to not miss the Kim stuff if they're trying to be a complitionist that would be nice.
I hope the negativity doesn't dissuade you from making the game because while yes some work needs to be done, I think you're making something special here.
I have a goofy smile on my face thinking about the MC seeing the lawnmower rotom or fan rotom and going "I shouldn't put my dick in that". I think the rotom scene should be a lil'joke, especially due to a specific form. Have like Regigigas or Jirachi do the "Oh no, Im stuck in the washing machine" porn bit.
I mean you should try to think of a Pokémon you like to start with and go from there, do a little research on their abilities and descriptions and try to come up with a premise.
I'll drop this one I made up just now but maybe a side scene for gen 5 could be running into a Throh and Sawk in a fight. They're counterparts to one another and you are given the choice to help one win the fight, judo vs karate or probably in the MCs mind BBW vs Fit (I know which one chainsaw would choose ;)). You then fuck the winner using the cock of the loser. Again chainsaw isn't made of side scenes but hey its a fun idea and fighting types aren't really represented much so far.
I saw someone have an idea for Victini but I wanna give one I had based on one of the weird facts about Victini. I think Victini should jump the player on the way to the 5th chapter, still applying the mythical rule where if you don't capture her, you can't catch her again.
Victini for some reason is the first Pokémon of gen 5 pokedex wise which is a break from the normal format of having legends and mythical be the last Pokémon pokedex wise in a new generation so I think having her basically jump the theoretical line by attacking in the intro would be a smart reference to that.
(Edit: I do realize this can theoretically cut out liberty garden so perhaps make this not a capture event but just her appearing, she was in a lighthouse)
(Edit 2: Oh even better, you can make a battle you can't win, hint about Victinis boundless energy like the other user talked about, setting up for Victinis encounter proper at the liberty garden)
I don't think the comments allow @'s so probably don't do that. Second, He said progress is slow right now so hes not that deep into the update. Also I know your not trying to be rude or anything but the idea of asking for a percentage is a little much. We're not a board of directors telling them that "We need Pokepussy to increase by 30% next quarter"
I've become kind of fond of Deoxys mainly because of the effort I put in to translate her text in order to understand it. It surprisingly cute when you actually read it and not to mention but because of how Deoxys works as a Pokémon, her inconsistent design due to the ai's limitations is actually explained.
A second place for me is Darkrai purely off of personal bias. The fight was a fun concept and her personality is a lot more feisty and bratty then the other legends, which makes her stick out.
I made another girl woohoo. Real proud of this one I went in with nothing and came out with more then I expected. I don't think I'll do this everytime I finish a girl because I don't want to come off as self-promotey unless chainsaws fine with it. Still this is an enjoyable experience and I think more people should give it a try.
I remember playing this game previously as its game jam version. I believe that technically that had more content but of course this is a full do over and spruce Ning up so while it feels that some content is gone, it will hopefully come back better. So far I enjoy it, classic clicker format with a lewd twist with its own identity. I do wonder if you plan some sort of rebirth mechanic at some later point or to bring back the strippers (thats the main thing I noticed was missing)
Edit: Ok noticed two minor issues, one personal one technical. The personal is the way the price of upgrades are shown I think they should use the same lettering method as the beer counter because its consistent and also the zeros strain my eyes somewhat. The technical is that the headlines that scroll up top didn't change to my bars name after I changed it from the default. That's all I see needing to be changed in terms of mistakes so hope this critique helps :)
The lakes thing might have been from me. When I was making my predications and explaining why the lake trio was with Dawn my explanation was that they all moved to Mesprits lake because Dialga and Palkia moved to the other ones. I think I did that because it doesn't make sense for them to both be at the sky pillar because if that was the case why are you only going after one and not both. Perhaps there was something about Mt Corenet I didn't know and Dialga and Palkia appear in different parts of the mountain but you would know better then me. Also Arceus is in an area above the Sky Pillar so those three being so clumped up seems a little off. Don't feel pressured to change from your plan because of what I'm saying here though. You know better then me about specifics of these games.
Edit: In your reply to that you said the phrase "...yes, for that exact reason,..." which while the rest of the quote isn't you saying D&P are at the other lakes, it can easily make someone think you mean that.
There is no way to know for certain but if you want I can give a guesstimate (not the dev btw.) Looking at what is left to do, there is 5 Legends left to be completed with their own side events. The time to complete these mons may vary depending on the importance of the mon in question. From what I have seen if nothing important gets in the way, a mon and their human partner can be completed in 1 1/2 to 2 weeks, and that's just average mons the next update has Arceus so that could be like 3 weeks. Along with that however, there is the other batch of side scenes Chainsaw wants to add to past chapters. These may take a day or two due to needing to create proper images and writing the scene itself. Add ship scenes which secret spoiler, they already completed the milk scene, and I think late October early November if nothing comes up.
I think the best way for me to answer is by generation:
Gen 4 part 2: Arceus, curious to see how that goes especially since the plan is to make her more complicated to capture.
Gen 5: Meloetta, I'm curious to see how the ai generation would work on her since she already has a feminine design. Also being a mythical usually means Chainsaw gonna get wacky with exploration or battle/quiz.
Gen 6: This is hard because there is so few choices but Hoopa or Xerneas because Hoopa got the hoop gimmick which seems fun to play with while for Xerneas in the game about breeding, the Life Pokemon has got to have some... interesting perspectives.
Gen 7(non ultra beasts): Necrozma, primarily because of the challenge it presents. That's been fun seeing with this game having to wrangle the story around the ai being finnicky.
UB's: I wanna be crushed by big bug lady legs. (Pheromosa)
Gen 8: Eternatus, not trying to be a trend chaser but I do wonder how we will handle da BIG.
Gen 9(non paradox): Ogerpon because it genuinely seems like the most interesting legend with its own legend in that poor poor game.
Paradox: The paradox version of The Swords of Justice because the other options kinda silly looking like ancient Raiku a giraffe
There are definite holes with this game though it does seem competent. The main issue is that some mechanics are either not explained or don't work. The garden doesn't get explained so for several days I thought it was useless because the time it takes to generate food is never said. Also Saturday's gather resources option doesn't function I haven't gotten any resources from her. If you patch those holes this game would be better.
I've been working on my little test game and man I can see why these updates take time. Coming up with what to write can be a challenge as well as tedious. I will say though that I properly looked at what you do for the cave/exploration sections and its smarter then how I decided to do it. Would probably adopt it if I do other things.
Edit: I just finished my first girl (woo) but through this test I noticed something about battles specifically. Due to the <<if>> statements involved in how it works, the text keeps moving up in down in spacing. And this isn't just me, I just now noticed it in this game also.
Example (from me):
Also look its da girl. Chainsaw can probably see what I mean by them doing the exploration in a smarter way then me.
So I've been playing around with sugarcube some more and I'll admit the format of the game I'm trying to make copies from yours a decent amount (imitation is the sincerest form of flattery). I'm trying to do the exploration type stuff you do when finding the legends (like WING, SURFBOARD that stuff) but have no idea how to do it while closing the other options. It seems to me you made a complex type of <<linkreplace>> macro so I'm curious what you did to make those work. Trying to find stuff on forums has been a headache.
Ok so some things I can say
Heatran is planned to be a futa, BBW is pending tho seems to be chainsaws proclivity's and the already round design can speak towards that
Giritina seems to be leaning BBW with the other forme being thinner. I feel that Dialga and Arceus would not be BBW because they are generally more slender in design, especially Arceus.
After each update chainsaw takes a week or two break to work on their other side project (the vore runner one you see on their page) to avoid burnout so basically all chainsaw has rn is ideas for 4.2 and that's about it. idk how long the next update will take but hopefully less then last time due to there technically being less mons to work on rn. That is to be seen tho
Just got through the update, twas a fun time with the new side scenes and new mons and pairings. Also was nice for you to add that thank you message I'm touched. And I will live up to that thank you message by pointing out the few mistakes I found from my light playthrough (it wasn't super thorough so may go back to find more)
Chapter 1: some of Mews text is the wrong kind of pink when you first open up her area (I think I pointed this out before but seems to have been missed, minor issue overall tho)
Chapter 2: HTML error when clicking 40 on Suicune's quiz question 1 (It still works but an error popping up will likely spook some people so I would count that as major)
Chapter 3: error with jirachi text color span (repeatable anal scene if memory serves me right and pretty obvious so would count as major)
span style="color:moccasin">Definitely asleep... not awake at all...
Just keep fucking my sleepy ass.</span>
Chapter 4: Intro has span error that leads to white text being blue (maple) (probably counts as major fix it is the intro to the new chapter)
Typo in Darkrai breed scene: Darkrai's laughter is cut off oas your dicks grow inside her (minor because its a typo thats still obvious in what it meant)
Anyway, enjoy the work on your side project (I assume thats what your doing now)
I doubt that will happen, its one person with all that text to translate it to other languages would be ALOT of work. Not to mention because google translate or ChatGPT is not the best way to translate languages, they would need someone who knows both to get a proper translation and this isn't exactly a game with a budget, its passion project made from mainly free tools (They could be paying for the ai but to be real I saw the prices for the improved versions of frosting.ai, that shit is way to much imo.)
I know your probably waiting for chainsaws own words but yes. Side scenes have been added to previous chapters just like with the last update. So that scene with Charizard in chapter 1 or Miltank in chapter 2, there is going to be more of those. You're free to pitch your own ideas for those as well side scenes are the thing I personally enjoy suggesting the most.