Currently reading ch 1 and I don't know if it's just an android/phone thingy but at some parts (more in the very beginnings) the names end up like "so(name), how about it?", "(Name)did you do it?"
Like there's no space between the MC name?? It's also same with quotation marks, there's unnecessary space between some and some not (I think you alrdy know but generally there should be no space at all between quotation marks if you're not like trying to quote something special).
I also saw other grammar related issues/errors throughout, idk if you've considered it alrdy but I think that you'd benefit a lot from getting a proofreader/testers
Otherwise besides these issues, I like the story so far, especially Walter... I hope I'll meet him again sooner than later hehe. I don't really understand his motives but I like that he still cares about me even if he essentially betrayed me... I like to imagine when I chose to cry realising what Walter did, that it affected him a lot more than what he showed