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Poor Poe Poe, she's really just put through a spin in this darn story, and I understand being in a situation that is slowly going to crumble apart with a deadline, even if the situation itself is bad.

But like the other comment says, this feels like a sprint through the events rather than a jog, a jog through the story and a jog through what's going through Poe Poe's mind.

In short, 8/10, there's something here but it needed some more of the story to make it shine

Note: You haven't marked the PC and Mac downloads for each platform so the Itch app refuses to download the game, downloading through the browser works fine

Wasn't sure what to expect coming into this one but I'm surprised in a good way!

I really felt for the characters, the moment Birdy's jacket went off, I think my heart hurt, and Faith just wanted what's best.

Short but sweet, a real 9/10, I hope they got a happily ever after

NOTE: The downloads have not been marked for platforms so the itch app refuses to download the game, works fine downloading through a browser

Quick heads up, the builds aren't marked as being for a platform so the itch app will refuse to download the game, I'm sadly not a dev on itch so I don't know how to fix it >.< Browser download works fine though

I'll wait for the sprite fix before jumping in ^-^

This VN is different in a good way, good backgrounds, great way of slowly peeling away at layers of information, the characters and overall art style are great.

Let got a real bad lot though, feel so bad for them ;-;

Played through to seeing all of the endings, figuring that out was fun and THANK YOU for putting a skip for one part after having done it already!

This was great and I'm not ashamed to say that a 18 year old me would have eaten this up like ambrosia, though still a good treat to the older and (probably not to be honest) wiser current me.

Camellia's struggles with a need for love/affection and anxiety is something the me of the past would relate to, and while I'm much better with it now, some of it still rings true today. Seeing her blow up on Anna was heart breaking and it had to stop and just put my head in my hands because I could see myself doing the same thing if I had been given the chance.

Jane... I love a good obsessive, and she is great, walls up high and hard to know what she's thinking, but there's enough shining coming from her to figure out if she likes the date or not which I think is nice going back for alt endings and actually knowing a bit more about her.

Anna, they're cool, best bud, really there and really 100% called the "It was always you" ending after like the first scene with her. Don't have a ton of words but she was great the whole time.

This is shockingly fleshed out for the jam, I had to basically do 2 whole playthroughs with plenty of saves to get all the endings, no idea how you had the time for that and all of the ending CGs!

In short: 10/10 wow that was some good stuff, hope you make more VNs in the future, great characters, great story, I'm going to try and forget my past anxiety a little bit after this reopened that mental wound!

I don't actually know if I got any words for this one, not in like a bad way

This feels like some 2008 ultra edgy flash game, the story and writing are consistent, the art works well. Like it's good, I feel it does what it sets out to do but I don't have any words to communicate my feelings further, that might be a defense mechanism, I don't think I took the content warnings seriously enough but I can only blame myself for that >.<

In short: 8/10, I don't know but those content warnings aren't light!

Well you're not wrong with what the story's about XD

This was a different experience than I've gone through so far but I think it knows what what it is and sticks hard to it. 

Gonna be honest this is so far out my usual thing that I don't know if I got words for what I just went through, no complaints though, this was good, curious what it'll be like with sprites and CG

In short: The description doesn't lie 9/10

This is kinda outside of things that I've experienced and people I know so I don't feel I can relate to things as hard as the other commenters but I enjoyed the VN, the characters, the art, and the story.

Out of what I've played so far in the jam, I'd call this an oddball pick but that is not saying that it's bad in the slightest and I doubt this will be the only one.

Might have to take a look at what else you've made, see how it stacks up :P

In short: 9/10, it looks like it's really hit the mark for a lot of people and I enjoyed it with my not completely relating and understanding brain

First of all, I may have squealed and clapped my hands to no one seeing the art so... I think I like the game :P

As an aroace person myself, I did kinda get that from Jinx, being more pulled in by being in Avery's spotlight rather than anything romantic. It will take me time to process relating exclusively toxic gay VN protags but that's more of a me problem! 

And thanks for rambling about love stories, it helps give more context to the work, was a touch worried I was thinking completely off the mark!

This is great, really felt for the characters and really felt their struggles throughout the story

A real 10/10 toxic yuri VN, hope to see more from you in the future!!!

Despite this being toxic for a toxic yuri jam, I really enjoyed the characters before Avery started getting really stalker like which caught me off guard because I went into games in the jam with the mindset that this will get messed up in some way

Even by the end, I very much enjoyed everything about it, it was a real treat to the brain and senses. Jinx ended up being...... weirdly relatable, not wanting anyone to see that side without the mask on.

I'll 100% put this in the set of VNs I unexpectedly found in a random set and will probably never get out of my head

In short: 5/5 this is amazing

Played this through and I can't say I fully understand it, it was a good VN to go through regardless. The writing, visuals, and music were great, a real treat to go through