This is kinda outside of things that I've experienced and people I know so I don't feel I can relate to things as hard as the other commenters but I enjoyed the VN, the characters, the art, and the story.
Out of what I've played so far in the jam, I'd call this an oddball pick but that is not saying that it's bad in the slightest and I doubt this will be the only one.
Might have to take a look at what else you've made, see how it stacks up :P
In short: 9/10, it looks like it's really hit the mark for a lot of people and I enjoyed it with my not completely relating and understanding brain