Poor Poe Poe, she's really just put through a spin in this darn story, and I understand being in a situation that is slowly going to crumble apart with a deadline, even if the situation itself is bad.
But like the other comment says, this feels like a sprint through the events rather than a jog, a jog through the story and a jog through what's going through Poe Poe's mind.
In short, 8/10, there's something here but it needed some more of the story to make it shine
Note: You haven't marked the PC and Mac downloads for each platform so the Itch app refuses to download the game, downloading through the browser works fine