The story was alright. Currently it asks some questions about free will, but you should expand upon your answers. There were also a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes with the dialog. The dialog also quite often extends outside of the dialog box.
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Thanks for your feedback. I couldn't make a grammar and spelling check or expand a lot with the story due to time constraints. I had just a few hours left when I wrote the story and I had some rooms left to make so everything suffered.
I'll take in account all my mistakes for future projects. I hope you enjoyed my game.