Thank you for in depth review!
We decided to put the lying part in the plot. I can't give you any detail without spoiling the endings. It might seem subtle at first but it's there.
About typos: that's what happens when non native speaker types story in a hurry straight into the engine (which obviously doesn't have spell checker) that's all I have for my defence :D.
I'll consider all things that you pointed in further releses. Once again, thank you for constructive criticism, I really appreciate it :).