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I like how there were little cut scenes, (like drinking water from the well!).  Your sprite art is very clear and nice~  if you like you could and a little bit of squish and stretch to the sprite for cartoony animation (but it is fine as is).  Text was a bit much at times, but I'm not much of a reader haha so I'm sure others don't mind.  However, there is a visual story telling rule, "show, don't tell" as much as you can.  Great job!  Check out my game if you have time~ 

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Hi, NeatGames! Thank you so much for the feedback, advices and compliments!