Here you go. First time any of the team have participated in a Game Jam. So far our struggle is that a lot of raters don't see how it matches the theme. It's subtle, and shows more the farther you get in the story.
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Ok I'll try to be constructive. You're game looks actually pretty good and the world is well setup. But the problem comes becuase of the nature of game jams, people are less likely to wait for long winded games. You need something at the beginning that will make you want to play the game more or for longer, whether that be through an interesting tutorial or and interesting start to the game. So your game could be the best thing in the world but it takes too long to get into it and it wont last in a jam. I still rated well considering this! Do try out my game :P