Excellent writing! I was very engaged in the story. I don't necessarily think everything in a story needs to be explained, so I felt the parts that were left out were well considered. Assuming I understood it, it's a very poignant ending, too. I won't repeat what others said about audio - the black-on-purple might be a little hard to read for some, so playing with new colors wouldn't hurt. A very solid entry. I enjoyed it a lot! 🎉
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The Marble's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
How much do you enjoy the game overall? | #30 | 2.714 | 3.000 |
How well does the game fit the themes? | #34 | 2.814 | 3.111 |
Audio | #39 | 1.307 | 1.444 |
Gameplay | #41 | 2.211 | 2.444 |
Overall | #45 | 2.171 | 2.400 |
Visuals | #50 | 1.809 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How long was your dev time?
2h 15m
Comments
Interesting little experiment. I thought the person we talked to was written pretty realistically, nicely done! To be honest, I did not quite understand the relationship between the player and the second person. Still a neat little thing, thanks for making it!
This is so good. I cried at the end.
Because you wonder the whole time why it matters -- why does the speaker care so much? And then you find out why, so tastefully, at the end. It's masterful!
5/5's across the board. Yes, even audio, because silence is the most appropriate. How is this your first project???
Unfortunely I don't have enough patience to play the game, but i found that I can manipulate the text show, so i had fun, 10/10.
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