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Hi. It's ok, but it lacks "players feedback". (take a look at this Jona's Tyroller's video about it. (The 2nd part, the feedback). That way player will learn better and faster, and with more fun, about what a star does in your video, what to do, what not to do.

:) Good luck, and keep making games!

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If this was a basic game, then I would agree with you but with the theme being 'The Game is a Lie', one of the important things is to make people commit to a lie first, then when they realize its a lie they began to ask the question 'what to do now?'. This applies for the star as player's first nature will guide them to it. The only thing I can think of to make it better would be to make it visible that it's a teleport and not a scene restart .