Really cool ripple effect! BUT it is also a little jarring.
FANTASTIC writing and LOVE the title!
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We thought it was a bit clever too, but then, we weren't sure if we were just full of ourselves :) And thanks for the feedback on the ripple effect. It's something we'd like to fix given the feedback we're receiving. Not only is it a bit intense, we wondered if it should be directional too. We'll keep brainstorming. Thanks!