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I completely understand where you're coming from. English is actually not my first language so I cannot promise perfect grammar, however this was my very first attempt at making a visual novel and posting it so I obviously wasn't as educated on some things as I am now. Although I do believe I am getting better with time, you can see from my newest project. I can't say I'm proud of this novel, I actually cringe whenever I think of how bad my storytelling skills were when I made it, but I decided not to delete it since some people seemed to enjoy it.

Sorry for the long reply, and thank you for the constructive criticism.

Hey it's okay! We all have cringe-worthy past projects. I have plenty of my own! Like I said, I wasn't trying to be mean about it because I liked a lot of what you tried to do. Are your other games here on Itch.io as well? Because I would certainly be interested in trying them as well. :)

I only have one more game posted at the moment apart from this one, I had more but I deleted them since they were so bad. Although I am working on something new.

Then I'll be sure to keep an eye out :)