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Bellannmae

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In case it doesn't get to you on Twitter :) Can't wait to see more!

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I played this a while back, but I forgot to share my thoughts! I really enjoyed it. You really captured the suspense and anxious feelings of the darkness. I wrote about it more in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/07/are-you-afraid-of-dark-black-pc.html

Hi! It's not bad at all for a zelda-like short game. I did write about it a little bit in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/06/free-itchio-games-15.html

If you ever expand on it, I'd love to play it again :)

Hello! I really enjoyed your demo. I look forward to seeing more! When I have some extra money, I want to back the game, but I also wanted to make you an offer. There were some issues with repeating dialogue lines, and once with a picture next to the dialogue box being doubled, as well as some grammar and spelling issues. I can fix the spelling and grammar errors for you if you like!  I've done it for a few other games and it can really help make a better impression. If not, that's okay! You can reach me by email at bellannmae@gmail.com

I also plan to write about the demo in my gaming blog, so I hope that helps as well! Take care :)

1) Which version did you play? Windows, Linux, or Mac? And did you run into any bugs or glitches?

Windows! Nope, everything went smoothly.

2) What was your overall impression of the demo? Did you enjoy it? Did it keep your interest?

It did. I really enjoy the premise, and I look forward to unraveling the mystery :D

3) What did you think of the animated backgrounds (i.e. the heat wave effect)? Did it add anything to the experience? Currently, there is an option in "settings" to turn the heat wave backgrounds on and off.

I thought it was neat. I'm used to pretty static BGs in VNs so it was different. I like seeing devs try new things!

4) How was my overall writing? Did it flow well? Was there any moment that you felt the dialogue was awkward or stilted?

Mmm. No, I felt the dialogue was pretty natural. I like the relationship between Nico and MC. I think a lot of people play argue with their friends so it felt natural.

There was just one error where MC says, "Whatever happened to ā€œIā€™m not so old that that the heat will keep me from having fun?ā€ " There's a double 'that'

5) Was there anything that you didn't like about the game or that you want to be changed? Do you have any suggestions for improvement? This question is especially important because I'm still at the stage where tweaking and changing things around is relatively easy.

Hmmm. No, I don't think there was anything in particular. I loved the changing dialogue boxes, because I feel that in some VNs it can be difficult to tell when a character is talking or just thinking, so having the dialogue box shift to a "thought bubble" was helpful.

6) What was your favorite aspect/part of the demo?

Learning the mystery! I was waiting for it. I love a good mystery so it made me really excited about the finished game. I can't wait to see it :) 

I'm going to write an entry about the demo in my blog, so I'll be sure to share it when it's finished.

Not a bad game. I really like the different gameplay mechanics you used. I wrote a more in depth review on my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/07/feelings-on-my-sleeve-my-other-world-pc...

I'm excited to get to look forward to another game by your team.A Hand in the Darkness was good, so I'm hoping to see more of that. I love the steam punk aesthetic, and once I finish the whole demo I'll write in the Gaming in Pajamas blog about it.
For now, I did notice some grammar errors. I've been keeping track, but the list has become a bit long. So I thought, if you like, you can send me the script for the demo and I can just fix it up for you.  If not, that's okay too. Just thought I'd offer :)

Hello! Your DEMO has been in my game queue for a while, but I finally got the time to play all the way through! I really like it, and I'm going to write an entry about it all in my blog, but I wanted to give you some feedback before that. So I got the questions you posted in the forums:

1. What do you think about the story/premise? Would you want to play it?

I think we've all had a crush on a teacher at some point, so it's relatable on that front. Overall I like it.

2. Which character seems most interesting? Who's your favorite so far?

I love Basil. Sassy smart boys are kind of my thing. So he's my first pick, but I find Mr. K and Sidney interesting also. Mr. K's chemistry jokes are killing me, hahaha :D

3. What do you think of Marina? Can you relate to her? Would you want to play as her?

I was never the athletic type so I wouldn't say I relate to her on a personal level. I like her, though. She's cute, and seems genuine.

3. What would you like to see from this game? What expectations do you have?

Romance and drama! I mean, so far it seems good. More puns!

4. How do you feel about chemistry?

I've taken lots of Chemistry classes, so good enough, I suppose. Haha.

5. What do you think of the current character designs/art direction?

I love your bright and colorful art style! Basil's hair? Love it. <3

6. Any other thoughts, comments, or concerns?

I love the Chemistry Education sprinkled in. Overall I'm looking forward to seeing more!

Hello! I'm liking the game so far, but as learned from one of your other comments, this was translated from another language. If you'd like, I'd be happy to help go over the script and correct some of the grammar and misspellings to help polish up the game a little. :)

I love the artwork! I wrote about it some in my blog also:

http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

So far so good! I'm smitten with the artwork! I also wrote in more detail about the demo in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

I really enjoyed the game. I hope to see many updates in the future! I'll be sure to let everyone I know to play it! :)

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Hello! I really enjoyed this demo, and I'm sorry to hear it's on hold. I hope you'll be able to finish it! I want to see ho wi tends :)

I wrote about the demo in my blog, along with some other games, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/04/demos-to-keep-eye-on-5.html

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Interesting! I always love puzzle games that want you ro think outside of the box.

I wrote about the demo a bit in my blog, along with some other games, here: pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/04/demos-to-keep-eye-on-5.html

This game was a unique experience, and I was caught off guard with the ending. Well done!

I also wrote about it in my blog, features with some other games, here:  http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

I really enjoyed this game. The ghost is so cute, and the game play mechanics were interesting.

I wrote a little about it in my blog as well, with some other games: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

A cute game! I enjoyed it. I wrote about it a little in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...


Good luck in future games!

I really enjoyed the game, it was in an interesting experience. I wrote about it in my blog also! :)

http://pajamagaming.blogspot.c...

Hello! I'm enjoying the game so far, I've just started a little while ago. I noticed there are some grammar/spelling errors. I wanted to know if you'd like help fixing them? I'm going to continue playing the game, but if you'd like, you can email me at bellannmae@gmail.com and we can talk about it. Thanks! :)

Here's the blog entry where I featured your game ;)

http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/05/home-for-...

Cheers!

I really enjoyed what I played so far ^^ The sprites are cute.

I know you said this game is translated from German, and some of the grammar is still not quite right. I can help fix it if you like! :) If you want to send the script to my email address: bellannmae@gmail.com then I can correct the errors and send it right back ^^

I look forward to a full version!

That was really great :) I wish it was longer! The voice acting was spot on too.

No problem :) Happy to help! You can send the script to: bellannmae@gmail.com

I'll happily fix it up a little and send it back ^^

Hello! I'm really enjoying the game so far. The day to day management tasks for Epponnie have such cute little pictures!

I am noticing that there seem to be many grammar mistakes throughout the dialogue. If you'd like, I can fix them for you :) I've done it for a few other games as well from other developers. It really just gives the game a better flow and a nice polish.

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I keep getting an error while trying to make my bread for the ducks.

FATAL ERROR in action number 1 of Mouse Event for Left Pressed for object dissimilator_obj:

Variable dissimilator_obj.cooking_snd(100292, -2147483648) not set before reading it.

at gml_Object_dissimilator_obj_Mouse_4


Then the game crashes. I can't get any further :(

Glad to be of assistance :)

A really cute game that I well enjoyed. :) I especially liked that you could choose an ending with both of the girls~ BFFs

I wrote about it also in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/04/oceanic-hearts-pc.html

Such a sad game, but I still enjoyed it. Made me love my 3 dogs even more. I wrote some more about it in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/browser-games-4.html

Such a cute game! I really liked it. I wrote about it a little bit in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/browser-games-4.html

Very interesting! I really liked the loop mechanic of the game. Took me a few tries to get it just right! I wrote some more about it in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/browser-games-4.html

What a unique and interesting game. Really looking forward to a full release.

I wrote a bit about it in my blog also: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/demos-to-keep-eye-on-4.html

I really enjoyed the prototype! I had a lot of fun. I wrote some more about it in my blog:

http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/demos-to-keep-eye-on-4.html

An interesting game. I enjoyed trying the different combinations!

I wrote some more about it in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/free-itchio-games-7.html

So cute! I liked the silliness of it all. I wish it was longer!

I wrote about it some more in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/free-itchio-games-7.html

Such a cute game! I love the little Corgi! I wish the game was longer :)

I wrote about it some more in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/free-itchio-games-7.html

I really loved this game, Pluto was always my favorite planet. :) Unique and fun to play. I wrote some more about it in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/03/plutos-tears-pc.html

I'd be happy to proofread if you can find a translator. :)

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I really enjoyed the demo. It was cute and a lot of fun. A surprise cliffhanger! I wonder whodunit? :) I look forward to seeing more.

One thing though, in Vanessa's room, there is an area by the eye that Renee drew where you can go from the top level to the bottom level. I don't know if that was intentional or an accident, so I thought I would share.

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I'm really enjoying this game! I just finished my play through with James, and it was so cute and sweet. I'm going to play as Dragon next, I think. The art is beautiful, and the story is well written. Although, I did come across some typos and errors I wanted to share with you--if that is okay. Is there an email I could send a document to? :)