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Bellannmae

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Of course! :D I just got to play through the extended demo and it was really great! I love the added features(and I had a much better date this time)! While I was playing, I picked up some grammatical errors, spelling errors, and sentences that were maybe a bit hard to understand, so I wanted to share them with you:

When the mall mascot wants to tell you his story, one of the options is: "Heard his story" when it should be "Hear his story" as it is present tense.

Haato speaks to the VA receptionist with the cat ears and says: "Oh, that's anti-climax." The proper word would be anticlimactic, as in, "Oh, that's anticlimactic." Haato also speaks in past tense and says, "... shota got corrupted..." but it would make more sense if it was "... shota get corrupted..."

In the streaming interview with Hikaru, the interviewer says, "Wow, I'm sure your fans is really happy." fans is a plural, so it should read, "Wow, I'm sure your fans are really happy."

When the VA receptionist is speaking to Haato in his apartment, he says, "One of the 'rabbits' is now escorted to hospital and we'll go live in one hour!" The sentence reads strangely to me. I feel it would read easier if it said something more like, "One of the 'rabbits' has been escorted to the hospital and we'll go live in one hour!"

VA Receptionist also says, "By rabbits, I mean people wearing rabbit costume and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show." Again, this sentence reads strangely. I think it might read better along the lines of, "By rabbits, I mean the people that wear the rabbit costumes and become the background characters on the 'Sunday Kids' show."

Haato says, "Alright, let's do this fast and get those money!" it sounds better as, "Alright, let's do this fast and get that money!" (I suggest this only because I have heard people say it this way before)

When Haato speaks with Hikaru, Hikaru says, "It's okay if I'm the one who do it." It should be, "It's okay if I'm the one who does it." There is also a small spelling error when Hikaru says, "Anyway, your should get the fuck out of this room now." 'your' should be 'you' in this case.

That's all I have noticed for now. I plan to replay again and try some different things too. If I notice anything else I will be sure to let you know! :)

I included Seiyuu Danshi in my Valentine's Day blog post here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/happy-val...

I kinda just wanted an excuse to talk about it... I'm really looking forward to the game! :D

I wrote about Monster Girl Island along with some others in a Valentine's Day post on my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/happy-val...

Looking forward to seeing this as a finished game!

I wrote a bit about my thoughts on Quest Failed for a Valentine's Day post in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/happy-val...

I'm really looking forward to Chapter 2!

I hope your exam went well. I really enjoyed the idea of this game, but I couldn't get anywhere. I got through to "what is that?" and couldn't get it to progress. I types until my fingers hurt and couldn't get what the game wanted. Maybe a hint bubble or something would be nice.

Anyway, I liked the idea, I just couldn't get through it.

Aw, yes! I'm so excited! I look forward to it! :)

Not bad! :D Good amount of challenge, smooth movements and controls. I like it :)

Looking forward to a full release! I really want to learn more about the characters. I did write about this demo a little bit in my blog, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/demos-to-...


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Really enjoyed this game! It really got surprisingly challenging as the levels went on, for me anyway. I love the concept, and it is executed rather well.

I talk about it a little more in my blog, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/free-itchio-games-5.html

I really loved this game, and it definitely gave me a fright at home alone in the dark.

I talk more in detail in my blog, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/free-itchio-games-5.html

Cute little rhythm game :) I really enjoyed it. I wish there was more content, I could play for a lot longer!

I talk in more detail in my blog, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/free-itchio-games-5.html

Interesting little strategy type game. I enjoyed playing! Although once I got the hang of it, it was pretty easy.

I talk about it more in my blog, here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/browser-games-2.html

I really enjoyed this short little game! It's cute and well done.

I talk in more detail about it in my blog entry here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/browser-games-2.html

Sure! It's been a while, but it can be found here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/02/browser-games-2.html :)

I'm so excited :D Definitely going to pre-order once I have the extra money.

Interesting! Looking forward to seeing more!

A cute game, even if it is a little strange. It has a certain charm to it :)

You can read more about it in my blog entry here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/super-homo-magical-girlfriends-pc.html

Oh, I see. Well I think the game is interesting so I hope to see the completed game some day :)

I keep getting a glitch where I cannot interact with the old gentleman in front of the nurses desk. I click on him and nothing happens. He will work one or two times and then stop.

Also, here are some grammatical errors, I'll capitalize the corrections:

"Let's just say we met in unusual (circonstance)CIRCUMSTANCE."

"Did I (told)TELL you she has psychic powers?"

"She didn't (knew)KNOW me."

"And while my brain was (goind)GOING too fast..."

"How did you two met(MEET)?"


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The game broke. I chose the charismatic option with Kara and got "The (link:) command should be assigned to a variable or attached to a hook.This tagged hook doesn't have a matching ]." twice, followed by "Check.
At the summer camp we worked at? (link:Check.)[Check. At her wedding? (link:Check.)[Check (and this is an awfully long story Ill keep for an other time). I dont mind it generally, but, you know... Tonight, I want to talk to Diana, and eventually kiss her. Consensually, of course. And it's really not the time for Kara to seduce me. Oh God... I'm fucked. (link:Try to say something intelligible)[(display: Kara5b")]]]]]" And no options to progress.

Got another error with Diane when trying to go outside: "I can't (display:) the passage 'insideSituation1' because it doesn't exist."

Not a bad story. But the ending seemed so abrupt!

An interesting game. I liked the sprite design. I had some trouble with the game crashing a lot, but I made it through and the endings that I got the 2 times I played through were interesting.

I talk about Desolate Village a little more in my blog entry: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/free-itchio-games-4.html

Very cute! I liked the Rapunzel feel of the game, and the puzzles were well constructed.

I talk about Lavender a little more in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/free-itchio-games-4.html

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A cute game. The retro appearance gives it a lot of charm and I like the message.

I talk a little more about it in my blog here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/free-itchio-games-4.html

Created a new topic I love it!

I didn't realize this was a demo as I played it. I fell in love with it, but when it cut to "Thanks for playing the demo!" I almost screamed. But in a good way. I look forward to the full game :)

I wish I could understand the dialogue in this game. It looks really neat, but I can't seem to get anywhere. :(

Such a BEAUTIFUL game. I really enjoyed it.

I seem to be stuck. Ratsu is inebriated, Riku and Hare are cursed(?) by Ratsu(oops) and I don't seem to have access to an item that allows me to trade for the tonic to heal Ratsu. I've tried everything I can get to. Sake, berries, fish, egg, mushroom, chocolate. I mean, I have a save I can go back too, but it was frustrating to get stuck without a way to advance is all. Just wanted to let you know about it.

Enjoying the game otherwise so far :)

What a relaxing little game :) I really enjoyed it.

Nice :) I appreciate the challenge.

Wow this is really great! A very Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past feel. I loved the puzzle bits, and the creative weapons(a crystal ball and a wand, I believe they are?).

I did have a problem. After I completed the game, I wanted to play through again. When I pressed c to start the game, I spawned in the wall and couldn't move anywhere.

Anyhow, I'll keep an eye out for the release of a full game!

I really enjoyed this game, and I'm not one for horror. The suspense and atmosphere are really well done. Hailey is a girl I can relate to.

I talk more in depth about this game in my blog entry here: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/imaginary-friends-for-pc.html

Cute game, I enjoyed it. Gave me a distinct "Alice in Wonderland" vibe. You did a great job :)

I'll edit with a link to my blog post with this game once it's posted. ;)

Created a new topic Cute, but...

This game is cute, and I like the graphics and the idea of it. But it seems unfinished. There is no sound, the controls feel sloppy(after you figure them out cause there aren't any control guides), and the "how to play" is mostly unhelpful.

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It's a cute game. It wasn't what I expected, judging from the image on the Itch.io page. Godxena is a clever name for a female Godzilla like monster. It would have been nice if there were other monsters too, and if the game was a bit longer.

I did have a couple issues. Once when I clicked to advance the text, it skipped a few lines of dialogue. Also, the second time I played through, Godxena's sprite was see through. Like you could see her, but you could see the background through her.

In any case, it wasn't terrible. Good luck in your future games! :)

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What a cute game! I really enjoyed it. I am so sad the demo ended before I could free the other birds. :( If you make a full version I will surely look for it :)

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I was really excited for this game because I love riddles, but the grammar is making it hard to read. I won't be able to complete. Sorry.

As soon as I open the game I get an error, and it closes. "A problem has caused this program to stop working. Windows will look for a solution."

A cute little game ^^ I had some control issues, but it is likely because I am on a laptop using a touch pad instead of an actual mouse. Also had trouble aiming my jumps. Still had fun playing though. :)