Yeah that's actually a big problem in my stories, i'm bad at pacing...but I'm working on it and I hope the next story is better.
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Thanks for your feedback, I always appreciate constructive criticism. My excuse for the bad pacing is my lack of focus. The problem you pointed out is something i'm well familiar with, and have been trying to steer in the right direction for quite some time now, but it's hard for me to do that because I just want to finish the project as fast as possible because if I take my time, then I will start getting lazy and stop writing for months...like I am doing with my current project. As I have said in previous replies, I will do my best to fix the issues and make an actual good visual novel...someday.
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I completely understand where you're coming from. English is actually not my first language so I cannot promise perfect grammar, however this was my very first attempt at making a visual novel and posting it so I obviously wasn't as educated on some things as I am now. Although I do believe I am getting better with time, you can see from my newest project. I can't say I'm proud of this novel, I actually cringe whenever I think of how bad my storytelling skills were when I made it, but I decided not to delete it since some people seemed to enjoy it.
Sorry for the long reply, and thank you for the constructive criticism.