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Wow thank you so much for playing and leaving this lovely comment. Sadly, I will not be working on a sequel to this because I'm putting together a new game and I just simply don't have the time :)

Yeah that's actually a big problem in my stories, i'm bad at pacing...but I'm working on it and I hope the next story is better.

Thank you so much Vernice! Although I didn't create those characters, i got them from tokudaya. And I'm not the only one using these characters, there are a lot more games with them. 

Sorry about that, I didn't do enough research.

I'm very glad you enjoyed. As for the bad grammar I apologize, I will try to fix it. Although you should keep in mind that English is my second language. Thank you for your feedback!

Hello, I'm not sure why you have a problem unzipping the file since it works fine for me. But here is another link to where you can download the game from HERE or if you want a direct download click HERE

If this doesn't work, the problem is likely in your computer :(

Thanks for your feedback, I always appreciate constructive criticism. My excuse for the bad pacing is my lack of focus. The problem you pointed out is something i'm well familiar with, and have been trying to steer in the right direction for quite some time now, but it's hard for me to do that because I just want to finish the project as fast as possible because if I take my time, then I will start getting lazy and stop writing for months...like I am doing with my current project. As I have said in previous replies, I will do my best to fix the issues and make an actual good visual novel...someday.

Have a great day

I only have one more game posted at the moment apart from this one, I had more but I deleted them since they were so bad. Although I am working on something new.

I completely understand where you're coming from. English is actually not my first language so I cannot promise perfect grammar, however this was my very first attempt at making a visual novel and posting it so I obviously wasn't as educated on some things as I am now. Although I do believe I am getting better with time, you can see from my newest project. I can't say I'm proud of this novel, I actually cringe whenever I think of how bad my storytelling skills were when I made it, but I decided not to delete it since some people seemed to enjoy it.

Sorry for the long reply, and thank you for the constructive criticism.

Thank you! And I know the NY ending was a bit dark to say the least but that's the point, I was aiming for a sad result.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and yeah, the art I used was from the same person that did the art for 'don't take it personally, babe' so that's why they look so identical.

I'm so happy you liked it!

Thank you so much! Your comment really made my day.

Thank you! And you can find the walkthrough here:

https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=...

Thank you! :D

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! And of course I don't mind.

Thank you! And yeah, that ending was a bit harsh but I just felt like doing it because I wanted to add a little more emotion to the whole thing. :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D