Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3
Makes sense! Sometimes things have to be imperfect at first to make the next time better! But that only applies to when your not sure how to improve right away. Also, as I said, the initial sprites of the white female wolf and the tall rude male wolf overlapped at first, as in they were set to the same point on screen, so it looked like he was blocking her, and could not see her expressions.