Maybe an explanation of why he is purple? Like some sort of passed down legend? Answered
Ah! There is a good reason you keep mentioning LotR!
Oh he is cute as well! ^^
That close up pic is superb!
The sprites will need their clothing changes too!
The sprites in ballroom are overlapping! I can't see them both!
Well that was a surprise! XD
And creatures like THAT guy need to learn that things can't be HOW THEY WANT IT AND ONLY THAT WAY BECAUSE THEY SAY SO WITH NO REGAURD FOR FEELINGS OF OTHERS!
Also having someone to help break up the altercations is vital too, not those who would only add fuel to the fire.
Don't be bitchy just because you disagree on something, and seek to use it as an iron fist.
There are a good number of grammatical errors present. It does feel like there are some areas where there could be more added details, to keep things from sounding flat or bland. The art is ok, but my only real concern is that it looks like its stretched wide, making the body proportions seem off. The general story or plot seems good, just lacking some proper details as mentioned. Even fort he dialogue, its almost there!
If you put effort into this its good for now! Can fix things at anytime.
Story good, grammar/spelling bad, and art almost good enough.