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Blue: I want to think about others.  Library.  Ha! That got him good!  Sometimes need such to snap you out of things.  Love the good advice.  The poor guy is trying to care at least.  Books.  A tool's only allegiance is to the one who wields it.  Different things make different people happy.  Streets.  Nosy isn't good but sometimes one ends up being anyway.  Was that a 19 or a Nat 20? XD.  Everyone has good and bad qualities, but it is all a matter of how you hold them in perspective.  Only a few people that could be.  The pressure is awful, but sometimes once you commit to something you have to see it through.  We all have our pressures, but we never know who to talk to, who will really listen.

Green: I want to think about others. Shopping.  It is hard for one to not have some measure of regrets.  Silly perv! :P  Er tough this felt like repeat form Ch 3 ?  Though I did do Ch Select.  Fashion.  It is always nice to wish well.  So silly.  Castle.  Darn him! X3  Come on should have seen that coming! :P  Ugg... I fold I fold!  The pressure is awful, but sometimes once you commit to something you have to see it through.  Some of the most awful things that transpire all come from lack of mutual/full understanding.

Red: Grounds.  Repeat form Ch 3?  Bakery.  Omg the name of the tribe, oh that is cleaver! XD  Big guy, little buns...    Harbor.  No one ever expects the kids!  Jeez could have at least quickly explained what you were doing to the poor woman!  I want to feel bad for them, but a crime is a crime and eventually someone is going to retaliate.  Best thing though is for someone to actually help them.  The pressure is awful, but sometimes once you commit to something you have to see it through.  It is true that is it is hard to be honest when there is no sense of hope for promise to be kept, that even the truth is not enough.  The way forwards is not by falling on old habits.

Not sure how much it does matter but made sense to stick to choice that best suits each path as for option selections of what to do.

I have a bunch of input but most of that is things you probably already thought of.  Only things I can actually think of mentioning is to make everything fully turn based, as abilities like float can tick down too fast, and to make DoT or debuff effects tick out of battle too.

Perhaps though some way to interact or mage with weight and/or enemies with effects on your weight too?

I like toothy grins! :3

People are always allowed to make their own choices, but no one should be surprised if there is suddenly some consequence.  However clear expectations are all must and all must abide by them.

Can't help loving how well Ole's behavior is done! :3

Hard to keep up a facade you know nothing about.

Should note there are typos here and there but funnily enough they bring humor.

This guy is a bit paradox behavior.  Bleh never could handle the taste either.  The mistake lies in continuing to humor him.  The mistake lies in lack of preparation which was also cut short by time.  We been duped...

!!!  oofff there a lot more to this...

Been a while trying this now, but had to do fresh save, dialogue skips... didn't realize there some obscure 4th wall bad end that didn't even let you reconsider...  but I laughed anyways.   Yes, I can be horny, but it didn't mean I wanted to go that far by that alone!!! DX  New form cute too ^^;

Think I had mentioned this last time, that desire to be different leading to actually being different.  The end point of that desire being its own curse.  Acceptance and tolerance do not come quickly.

Time fur what I came fur.  4th wall break AGAIN! XD  Oh hypocrisies D:

Serious comedy serious comedy tailspin!  Iron fist no good, but so too can be boundless freedom.  That was neat!

It is sad..., but we are adorable.  I will admit I'm a bit of perv though... 

!!! Cool.  But I want to squeeze our face!

The dynamics make me laugh so much.  Hrm very interesting and it lines up with what been told.

Aww... D:

Oohh! :D

Huggies!

That was awesome, you know how to keep my interest in multiple ways.

You could have just asked nicely like a living being.

tail wags!

Kim so handsome AND cute! :3 (will eventually need to do other routes)

Feels like there may be a little bit more going on here than thought.

Great to be happy go lucky but also need to maintain a level of realism too.

There more here?

If you can't communicate...

Something haunting him...

Honestly, he was asking to get hit by not thinking.

Until next time.

I missed these guys! (and girl)

I await with interest!  What twists are in store!?

Cute, Sweet, and Silly! :3

And dreamy! <3

I like how much they all care about their efforts.

While those up top fight, those below can suffer.

Fun and Smiles! X/3

Burger! ^^  Closing off is never good but just need someone to open you up again.

Can never hide from the sniffer! X3  Woah!

That was bearly bareable! XD

Science of meat!  And some other things. ...

Ouch! :/   And then... :3  Honesty! <3  Yes, in some way

I knew it! :D   No one wants to be doted on that much! ^^;

Doing the right thing, when you know not what it exactly even is...    He can't bear it or can he?

Not wrong to be doubtful but living in fear is no good either.  When adults forget they are adults...  Business world not the same as rest.

Should have seen this coming...  !!! :D

Strange? Yes   Impossible? No

Dude! DX XD

Now I feel bad for bear.  I worry now too.  No use in hiding it now.  Hehe murr!  Hrm...

XD  Oh!   Oh!

Love it all! :D

I've missed this VN!  I hope to find a way to be able to apricate all the effort you have put into it!

Thank you.

True prejudice is when one's goal is to make anyone who they perceive as not standing with them suffer.  It has no proper reason other than being born from negativity.

Gay doesn't have to mean feminine after all!  I don't know about those kinds of products either!

Nice to tell the truth but sometimes TMI.

< Horny silly in private, when not being serious

Good reunion!

The faces with that joke! XD

Play Play!

Silly, sweet, and hot!

I feel this update hit some of the best notes.

I think I'm a build behind starting with 7.

What the fox is doing represents what happens, in part because of the teachings of the religion, and the result that happens from the feeling of that which is meant to protect you turning its back on you.  Yet I say again that while people may have their belief in God, God is not as all powerful as we like to think (it doesn't work the way people expect it does), for I again go back to a point I made in a prior build that God is more a form of collective belief/community, therefore his power only exists by the collective belief in him (power by worship but also shaped by the worship).  This sadly means that anything done in his name gives him power in regard to what is done but how that manifests is not always clear.  This is like the Golden Rule but a third party is involved which can now use that power elsewhere.  This though is also where the concept of the Devil comes in too.  All this though in motion could be a way to explain why what seems like divine for good or ill goes like waves and may even come back as it affects everyone differently.   We always say they are on opposing sides, but it does not mean they exactly oppose each other.  Still, it is up to the people as to accept or reject either influence, what is viewed as being led astray, but that may all stem from a little bit on influence rippling outwards over time.  This influence is not necessarily hidden; it is more ignored or not looked for, for it may start small and it may be mixed with the other.  Do even we know all of what is in our own hearts?  What appears good may not be and what appears evil may not be, at first glance.

Next up what influences us?  We have ourselves, our family, and whoever and whatever we spend our time with.  Any one of these can change us, but so too does changing them change us too.  The funny thing about changes though, not all change is good.  Time and again we need to take as step back and figure out motives for what we see, not just what we see.  There is also the fact that what comes about can come from anyone for we are all people, no exceptions.

It always does perplex me how those who believe in the religion are readily able to forgive even if they cannot forget compared to someone who is not and are more prone to vengeance.  It is true the ability to recognize what you did wrong is important, but that requires being self-aware of one's own actions.  Talking to each other about simple things is often the best way to start bridging any divide.

One thing to mention is that you are going to need to reread the entire script perhaps, there are some typos not caught because they are otherwise still words, just not the ones you meant.

Ah the sins, when one becomes consumed by personal desires warping their perception of reality.  It takes strong willpower in order to embrace it without going over the edge.  That ability to understand what going too far is.

Then we arrive at diversity, different people being near each other, but this only works when there are a collectively agreed upon behavior for the given setting.  This is so that even among our differences there is a way we still can get along.

In any conflict the ones who pay the biggest price are those who are innocent.  Justice still can prevail, but justice is not always such a clear concept.  Conflict is always the price of peace, peace must be carefully maintained else conflict will arise, and yet then only through conflict once it starts, to find a resolution, can peace be made again.  All conflict causes wounds, but wounds do not have to be fatal.

Really like the CGs in these builds.

Never too late to learn.

Cat went out and back into the bag.  Whopps!  Least this guy is fierce but playful!

More backstory! Great! :D

Children should never be forced to inherit the sins of the father OR mother.

It always should the will to provide and the will to protect but also need to will to let go as well when needed for one cannot always be there.  Help people be able to help themselves.

Regardless of classification we can never know what one thinks unless we are willing to talk and to listen to each other.

OMG His new expression caught me off guard! XD

The only people who can truly understand the horrors of war have to be involved in it.

Hard work can produce the best results!  So long as you have been doing your best to work with everything that already exists then the update should be at least very good!

It is hard to work witha skill you not so often used to using, but with practice and good intentined cirtique should help you hone that.

Also cute art you got for this page to exemplify things!

On one paw I get people's concerns about just how widespread and accessible NSFW stuff can be because sites and people could utilize things that could borderline between Safe and Not.  This most often those stands to be more subject to interpretation.  Anything clearly NSFW should not be made easily accessible for those who are not ready for it.

As far as Sileo is concerned with what I see, the novel does not focus much on NSFW even though it has it.  The NSFW is made as a reward rather than freely given for little to no reason.  The story focus on relationships and bonding first.  This is why I love it so damn much.  It feels natural.

Some discomfort can be expected, but so long as it does not go as far as alienation, which this does not do at all.  If anything, Deigo route had one of the best ways to resolve what had actually been a complex situation beneath the surface.  It is also why I am still so curious in the after story too!

I haven't tried this one in a while, but good to know.  Regardless of whatever I may feel after trying it again going through the updates, I feel like why not have it on Seam as well?

This story is about looking deeper than the surface at issues and interactions and their impact.  That is something that greatly grabs my attention.

I do noy have enough knowledge here to provide any real advice, but I think Rave says what I cannot.

I had a vested interest in the story for you made it feel real, by going through the details of why everyone acted as they did.  For me those explanations are what helped me to connect to them.

All we can do is our best to carry on but not forget.  Compared to others I am insignificant, but those you made closest ties to shall be the best way to help you keep going.

O W O ! <3

Took me a while to get to this.  They still got that banter! :D

Adjusted the images again, they look GOOD!  Murr!

Yeah I don't like it either, but it is matter of personal choice.  Besides by now knowing his personality has helped ease my discomfort.

Happy! Cheeky! Delightful! <3  And thoughtful! :D  And toothy smiles!!!

There is a reason we got handrails and guardrails! haha! XD but seriously that time for him was terrible!

That uncomfortable feeling among unfamiliarity, one must realize anyone can have it.  This is supportive.

Woah! That looks good on him!  I know nothing of fashion, but I like!

That THING is only an issue if it is overbearing and controlling.

XD Best thing worst place!  He is not wrong... if only there was better way,

Food first! Memes later!... Wwwaaayyy later! X3

Now this is funny surprise! ^^  Smooth!  I mean just because they aren't together anymore doesn't mean there can't still be something.

SALMON! <3  Rolls!  Poor doggy... hehe!  Poor kitty too, that can be rough for both sides.  All because of expectations out of fear.

Poor woman...  least she is dealing with nice guys.  LOL, as much as I don't like that reference that was perfect!

Oh that darn shecat!  But for a guy like him. who wouldn't!

PUNS! XD  Thoughfulness!

ROFL can't believe that just happened!  Adorable!

Simple and beautiful!  This is to be proud of! :D

A good job doesn't always mean an interesting one... and references to own work again! :3

Yep that is how the country has felt for years now...  that too is how our nation pushes things, get people who don't know how a job works into a position above people who know how it works.

Woah!  While I have no particular love for this line of work, I still value trying to treat others with some decency.  The bar may be lowered, but it does not mean one can trample all over others.

Even if I want to it is too soon, just be nice.

Those who work harder should always be paid more, no time for slackers, you have a job so do it.  Exception course that you aren't being overworked.

Crappy bosses or leaders surrounded by yes people... just the times we live in, doesn't matter what group one belongs to, there can be corruption anywhere.

These are very sick and twisted behaviors we should not ever try to normalize.  Some tourists aren't much better than some locals.

What's a woman? (Just ignore)

To genuinely care about others is to go above and beyond.  Simple cute outfit!

To say people in this line of work are misunderstood can be true, but it is also hard to not think certain things of them.  Still, all it takes is the right people to break the mold or peel back the layers.  Sometimes there is no avoiding things that can be sexist, but sexist can go both ways.  Ill-mannered people breed and promote ill manners; it can come from any categorization for we all are equally capable.

It is nice to sexual fantasies, but some of them go too far, especially depending on the situation, location, and context.  I find it very important to remain humble and have some restraint.

Beautiful CGs!  The seals goal would be my goal, but I can't help anyone if I can't help myself, like the wolf.  I am always betwixt.

Metajoke! X3 and some lols! Big happy puppies! ^^

Ah something very real, we tend to glorify a lot of things, but the actual reality of a lot of it never actually matches up.  There is a reason some traditions work well and are sorely needed in a world that is lacking in decency.

That is something I find despicable is having boundaries being violated and here to boot he doesn't even know his own preferences because of it to determine the boundaries!

WHAT!?!  Yet seriously though these are dark thoughts that even I have about those that abuse others or even look the other way while others get abused.  I could never live with myself though if I ever did.  It is a conflict of morals and feelings.

The biggest issue that arises is when people willing defend or encourage others bad behavior in effort to promote a superiority and sense of special.  The idea that just because of some categorization means you are above the rest or can ignore consequences.

In the end murder is still murder, no matter the justification and does not always mean you can just be off the hook.  What this points to rather is everyone always looks at the symptoms and results, they never look to the root causes, they simply play the blame game, nothing actually changes.  To lift someone out of a hole is to also make sure they do not fall into another.  You cannot provide for someone who will just waste your generosity either.  These are the issues no one understands that some do want to rise up, and some want to pull others down.  Forget society at large when locally your own people hold you back.  Those who claim to be there for you aren't actually there for you; they are there for control, for they do not uplift you, they will only pedestalize you.

The problem here is that your ending message kills everything, it ruins and muddies it.  Yet at least in this particular case I can see why he had to do it.  Pull them up and out only for them to fall once again.  To give a message and then have it be betrayed.  What is the moral even anymore?  All that is left is this tether of love.

In the end though what does make me proud is that you acknowledge it.  That you know it is something that isn't quite right.  Despite some disgust, I think it was presented in a measured light, not ignoring the reality in favor of any particular side.  This is the kind of content I apricate the most.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

The strange part one may not realize is that shadow banning is a pastime for even members of the community.  Its highly unfair yet deemed permissible.  If people can do it to others than so to can they can do it to projects.  This is merely the sad evolution we ignored.

This though is a matter of principle that shadow banning is not right.  Yet even among us some find glee from causing misery.

Funny twist opening! X3

Not the most pleasant seeming event but it is in privacy.  Species jokes! X3

Damn wish I could see that belly...  Glad they take safety seriously!

Metajoke! XD

Nice to have some generosity out there!

The woes and the Hellos!  Murr...

That is why I never want to do drugs...

So cute! ^^ And :/3

Personality first, looks second, both CHECK!

Show off :/3

Acceptance and inclusion is great, but all must still behave.

Bears are good too! ^^  Could be seen as message about passage of life.

Maintain positive interaction within reason.

He put on pants! O.o

Even among our differences the dead still are something to be respected.

Being able to learn quickly is important but one needs to know what they are in for first.

Time skip..., but was needed.

Survival as people and principles that allow us to connect is always important.  A private place where such acts are sanctioned, it has my approval then.

Consent and conservation are important!  So too is modesty and decency.

Oh you cleaver making a tie in to your main VN! :D

And here we have the real issue with people of "community" where what they see is what yhey think they are always going to get within it.  This does though too include what bleeds out for others to see too.  Even we are judgmental for something that is meant to be accepting.

Nive and simple finish.  Perfect afterwords!

Oh gawd! Got to be careful what we teach others!  Someitmes hard to know what to prioritize.

The lengths people will go.  The loss of not being able to experience something that is natural.

This is certainly unsettling.  Another nice blend of both silly and serious back and forth. :3  Good friends know how to help keep perspective on priorities. What do we do when we can't meet the expectations of a path laid out in front of us?

Oh interesting!  This got much deeper.  Kindness comes best from a position of understanding.

!!! :D I been waiting so long!

Was great to go back over quickly some of the moments I enjoyed the most.  Had to though re review the prior update.  Everyone in general needs to be careful about what behaviors and actions they normalize, though here you also dealing with one who can truly exert control over everything alone, nothing to hold him back.

I can feel it, the harsh reality of what it means to REALLY fight.  This is what no one wants but you KNOW in this case there is no other choice.  When surrender would truly be worse than death.

Time for logic not emotion! No time no time!

I really got into that! Woah!

Whatever will happen when it is ready I will be thinking I am prepared.  I'm sure I won't in the end.

There are elements that already are things my sona couldn't handle.  Adds a bit of extra personal excitement to it.

Long as you keep updating us all I am more than happy.  Real life is always a priority, but I feel like this novel always has had a lot of worth to it even without the need for psychic part making me not want it to be abandoned.

While I may have always had my own preferences on things I cannot deny that each character had an appeal to me.  For me it really came down hard on both Jude and Aiden for I saw myself in both of them and their values and beliefs and even the way they act.  Yet like Mason I am stuck in the middle in reality.  In the end sadly when it came to making a choice, I had to make my choice that could be based on something that even I feel is a bit shameful.  YET it is mired in my wanting that, while I choose Aiden I could still somehow workout things with Jude and Aiden.  My personal desire is to allow for the option to have Mason mend the unneeded rift.  Even if I cannot have them both at once, I want to keep Jude close.

What I've always seen is Aiden's desire to his rich standing to give to the poor.  You don't see that much for real.  I also seen how Adien wants to work with Jude to find an arrangement to give Jude what he needs without it being a handout, something Jude made clear he does not want.

While I may be discarding Quinn and Sam for now, these are feelings that still linger from the last release that I still hold onto.  This is all how vivid I still remember the story and characters.  I may base myself in logic, but it is not without emotion.  This may be a work of fiction, but I cannot help but feel for them for I see them as if they were real people.

This sounds like a fun continuation!  If it is only going to be fur the subscribers though I understand!

I know you don't want to hear from me and welcome you delete this as needed.

It was a while ago now it occured to me, what was in that Wal Mart policy again?  Perhaps as dumb as it is I read the wording wrong?  The whole thing started in part because I read conFIRmation, when the word may have been conFORmation, which mean two different things.  That alone would have been all that was needed to get me to back down from the start, making everything that has happened just even more beyond ridiculous.

If I read it wrong that is me having been dumb, but to not have shown me the mismatch is also poor.  It did no good either having tempers flare up.

No matter what everything still feels like its beyond being able to properly apologize for.  That bothers me that even if to have to say I'm sorry again even after I did from the start, it will never be enough.  I don't know if any amount of apology from you will be enough either.  After all they are just words...

Shifting things around a little so it fits in place moving forwards sounds smart.

I do love that Lorenzo and Danny's family makes the effort to be open and accepting of something they do not fully understand because they just want others to be happy and care more about the actual person.  Forget identifiers and categorizations, if you are a good person you will act like one.  It is something heavily implied in the talk you have with him.

I am actually quite curious of Warren for there does seem like there is information not being given yet that may be important.  He comes off as quite harsh until you realize he does have some reasonable concerns, but how much is reasonable though?  I have a feeling there may be a way to both help him and get away from him.

I love how much detail you give all the characters.  It is the reason why even though Zeke upsets me I want to have remain as is.  I feel like for me it important as a way to challenge my own feelings without the need to dive directly (Choosing).  It gives me feeling there is something I am missing since I feel like all I'm seeing is the surface.  To me that says you are doing good job.

All I can say is look to the writing that has already been done as something to refer to in order to keep thing feeling the same.  Do your best to maintain that vibe for each character's personality.