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Ty for reading it so far! Glad ya enjoying the vn so far haha, but to make clear God is not a concept, He is the Creator :3.  Im sure ya still have some more to read im sure ya will like it how its going so far

No worries love to get feedback on my vn! Any theories for the future of the story? :3

Glad ya like me xD, and happy to see the Pope has a fan too haha

Nice, ty! Any fav character so far?

hewoo, happy to hear ya took time to read, so i will respond to wich point!

1- I made the first part 3 years ago and at time, i was sure how the story would go so far in terms of progress, so i had made James sudently went to Hyvindle, but i can make better with time to be less vague. The part of idea of being a dream or coma is totaly bad for me, i hate when that plot of being all a dream or the mc was in a coma, always been a bit ridiculous to me xD. So my intent is that really happened.

2-I think I made up clear James thought was a set for movie or something in the genre, and that the village was empty because they had to go to the castle.

3-I wanted to do something a bit like narnia and how even if it's a different world they can understand each other and the text in the books is just something  i made up while doing the art haha.

4-Will try to take care of it in future!

ty again for reading , any fav character, moment ot scene ya would like to share or even theories?

awwww ty glad ya liked it so far <3

Glad ya liked it all so far, hope to bring the next build soon as possible!

Ty^^, what was your fav moment of the new build?

Awesome ty, it's such a fun game, hope more people see it!

It's a nice game and theme! I loved seeing the Holy Bible in a shelf :3, idk if it was me but to jump I was using more of the up arrow or "W" instead xD, the game is easy to understand and the concept is well designed! Just wish we could have manual saves and spawn where we saved haha. Rest is really good, great job!

Its a mixture of a daily attire with small parts of armor

No worries it happens haha, well i see ya like me and Bart the priest boios haha, and about Dylus and Torin, well its hard to make always the story focus on just one two characters cuz for me a story is build with the protagonists yes but also with the secondary characters and other types, but don't worry I' ll try my best to work with all my ocs and create a awesome story, tysm for the support, also i just didn't use anime for inspiration ;3. And for the bad guys let's see how it goes! And I want to finish this story! Just its hard when ya are one guy working on it lol

Tysm haha! Glad ya liking it so far, Ik William was blend in the start that's one reason he's in this part of the story ik he would fit really well here, and ty again im trying to get always better at my art and I plan to rework some of the old arts so it can all look more like 6 and 7th builds, also happy the pace it's good i was worried the story was really going super fast. I need to check all the errors i thought they're corrected xD, also glad ya have a fav ;3, Any comments on the new characters and more of the old ones? I tried making a bit  more screen time for the Morih(wolf king) and the dark lord, so people can see mroe of them if they're are they're favourites i also hadded a bit of next text in the royal party scene, I wonder who can get that ahah, and what did your friends said im curious to hear their opinions.

I see, in medieval times, from what I saw duels were to dead most of times, so we could say James got lucky the first strike didn't just end him there, and he wouldn't get no accountability, since the duels are permitted in the Canine Kingdom. He and most of the wolves, dogs and foxes, still have grudge to oursiders do to the invasion and preffer still being closed to them with some exceptions like the sheep most of all, and James is lucky to be in the canine society, since he's with Dylus and with the King, and what about the new characters any opinions? :D

TY! Idk what parts ya think it's cringe but feel free to tell me haha, i never watched that anime. I' ll try haha i just think how the story can go in a good pace!

ty for testing it out hope ya enjoyed the story so far and isn't buggy xD <3

yes xD

Thanks for telling me that already fixed the size <3

thank ya, already fixed it <3

sent a friend request in discord <3

Thank ya for liking my vn, glad ya liking it so far, but what do you mean ya need your pc didn't work, mine is 8gb and it all runds smootly maybe you had something switched in your definitions?

Yeah... that's my bad, I needed that part to happen, and that was I could think for the plot to progress the way I wanted, but your feedback its always good, thank ya for the comments and hope ya stay for the next builds❤️‍🔥🤗

Well i told ya before i had a friend from US correcting my script, he needs time to check everything up and thats why some parts are still in need of correction, and i also had a friend, learning coding, that helped me with some code things like adding torin drolling or the part where dylus flips and go to the kitchen, the text going sometly and the mouse looking like a mini sword. So please don't say that, because i had two friends helping me at the time of build 3, i didn't want to manage more people with at that time cuz i had school too and couldn't focus 100% on it while talking with more and more people, hope i can clarify things.

More help would be apreciated yes, maybe i can dm ya in twitter? Since i need to work on the discord for the vn still🙏

Again he tried but in the end he wasn't  able to tell Dylus :3

Yeah, most of what ya say its true haha, but i referred James trying to tell Dylus but not managing to do it, because of his busy schedule and him resting always in bed do to his fractured rib.

James martial arts aren't the best, the King never saw something like that before, since in Hyvindle they just used weapons or punches in fights and he wants for his soldiers to learn so they could prevain something like invasion that happened years ago, James didn't who they're talking about, even thinking it could be a cult thing, but he i had him thinking talking with about it to Dylus but he couldn't do to Dylus busy schedule, but maybe i didn't pharse it that well? Pls tell if there anything that is wrong and I will correct it.

Thank ya means a lot to me, glad my work makes some people happy^^, wich parts ya would say, i could make the pacing better?

Nice, yeah there is much to learn still, I'm planning on focusing on that part now for build 7 has tensions arice with Fernando take over of the castle, I don't want the plot just to focua on the wolfs but focus on other animal folk too, so I  assure thisnext build will have more species :3

you mean King Morih, as white wolf, and Dilefor, has the silhouete?

yeah that normal, but im happy ya liking it so far x3 <3

ooo i see haha, yes the king knew a human would come, but not James, thats why he said offspring of Adam, and he did not practise magic, that is evil, he's has a blessing from the Lord and trough that he saw what Jetki new since it was passed down generation to generation. i might create a power scaling ref for ya all, but the good guys just have their natural strenght and some have blessings, while the bad people use magic and dark things like sorcery.

was ya that commented?

I'm confused, wich white wolf, Dylsu brother? There are no misteries of him he died sometime ago before James arrivel in Hyvindle :>, and what mysteries are curious about :3.

Thank ya for telling me your thoughts and theories always apreciate to hear what people think, I think ya are one of the first with interest on Dylus brother, haha

Hey what was the coment about?