Tysm haha! Glad ya liking it so far, Ik William was blend in the start that's one reason he's in this part of the story ik he would fit really well here, and ty again im trying to get always better at my art and I plan to rework some of the old arts so it can all look more like 6 and 7th builds, also happy the pace it's good i was worried the story was really going super fast. I need to check all the errors i thought they're corrected xD, also glad ya have a fav ;3, Any comments on the new characters and more of the old ones? I tried making a bit more screen time for the Morih(wolf king) and the dark lord, so people can see mroe of them if they're are they're favourites i also hadded a bit of next text in the royal party scene, I wonder who can get that ahah, and what did your friends said im curious to hear their opinions.
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Regarding the other old characters, we felt like Torin is the most neglected by now, and how the narrative seems to be forgetting Dylus more and more lately. With such a big cast, it's no wonder, but it is unusual how much Dylus seems to be fading off screen lately. Other than that, we liked the dinner at the Pope's with the many new nobles from other kingdoms introduced. I find the timid lion priest the cutest. guess I have a type pfff
My reading group had pretty similar impressions I'd say, we didn't have any big disagreements or debates. Some of my friends who watch anime more than me were screaming at the shonen fight scenes and trying to figure out which anime exactly inspired those poses. Other than that, the entire reading group was intrigued by the first seven deadly sins general's design and we're curious to see the remaining six. The overall mood of the reading group is: let Kur keep cooking.
The fact that we're getting more characters and plotlines introduced this late into the story made me realise that the pacing and structure kinda reminds me of fantasy webcomics (visible art evolution of the author through the year included). I only hope this game will avoid the most common pitfall of webcomics and isekai FVNs: going on for years and years and eventually being abandoned and unfinished.
No worries it happens haha, well i see ya like me and Bart the priest boios haha, and about Dylus and Torin, well its hard to make always the story focus on just one two characters cuz for me a story is build with the protagonists yes but also with the secondary characters and other types, but don't worry I' ll try my best to work with all my ocs and create a awesome story, tysm for the support, also i just didn't use anime for inspiration ;3. And for the bad guys let's see how it goes! And I want to finish this story! Just its hard when ya are one guy working on it lol