I read it with friends in a call and we had a blast!
The typos and English were a bit better than usual, but still numerous. There is a very strange formatting with asterisks in certain parts, it's really inconsistent.
I liked seeing the different kingdoms and new characters. The new perspectives were a bit overwhelming, but ultimately refreshing. The plot is actually advancing at an accelerated pace, which is something isekai FVNs tend to often struggle with.
The gradual improvement of your art has been noticeable over the builds, but here it hit me really hard when seeing the contrast between some of the earlier forest and building backgrounds and the illustration with the sheep daughter and father.
I loved everything about Harobes and Beningus (but Beningus is my fav char in the game already so I'm very biased)!
And ultimately, William finally justified his place at the title screen! He went from the blandest of the cast to serving and carrying so hard.