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Oh wow, I can't believe I missed this reply! Itch's notification system is weird.

Regarding the other old characters, we felt like Torin is the most neglected by now, and how the narrative seems to be forgetting Dylus more and more lately. With such a big cast, it's no wonder, but it is unusual how much Dylus seems to be fading off screen lately. Other than that, we liked the dinner at the Pope's with the many new nobles from other kingdoms introduced. I find the timid lion priest the cutest. guess I have a type pfff

My reading group had pretty similar impressions I'd say, we didn't have any big disagreements or debates. Some of my friends who watch anime more than me were screaming at the shonen fight scenes and trying to figure out which anime exactly inspired those poses. Other than that, the entire reading group was intrigued by the first seven deadly sins general's design and we're curious to see the remaining six. The overall mood of the reading group is: let Kur keep cooking.

The fact that we're getting more characters and plotlines introduced this late into the story made me realise that the pacing and structure kinda reminds me of fantasy webcomics (visible art evolution of the author through the year included). I only hope this game will avoid the most common pitfall of webcomics and isekai FVNs: going on for years and years and eventually being abandoned and unfinished.

I was browsing new FVNs to check out and downloaded this one, not paying attention to the release date. I didn't suspect a thing, and you even made an Android version that I went for.

Needless to say, I was in for quite the surprise!

The premise looks really interesting and I loved the preview art you made, so I really hope this gets developed into a VN with a proper story. I'll be checking out the narrative update you posted... carefully!

I read it with friends in a call and we had a blast!

The typos and English were a bit better than usual, but still numerous. There is a very strange formatting with asterisks in certain parts, it's really inconsistent.

I liked seeing the different kingdoms and new characters. The new perspectives were a bit overwhelming, but ultimately refreshing. The plot is actually advancing at an accelerated pace, which is something isekai FVNs tend to often struggle with.

The gradual improvement of your art has been noticeable over the builds, but here it hit me really hard when seeing the contrast between some of the earlier forest and building backgrounds and the illustration with the sheep daughter and father.

I loved everything about Harobes and Beningus (but Beningus is my fav char in the game already so I'm very biased)!

And ultimately, William finally justified his place at the title screen! He went from the blandest of the cast to serving and carrying so hard.

Can't wait to read about this dreamcatboyfailure! 🐈

Congrats on the release! Can't wait to check out your game and the rest of the entries~