| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Art / Graphics | #1 | 5.000 | 5.000 |
| Sound/Music | #2 | 4.750 | 4.750 |
| Controls / UI | #6 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
| Overall Fun | #10 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
If you have competed before, how has your game changed?
The game and story have essentially been completely rewritten in response to previous feedback, also, there's a lot more art now!
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Thanks for your word! Improving the writing, getting more Japanese VAs, and more art is just some of the things on the agenda.
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ps, have you reached the scene with the holiday singing in chapter 8?
Yeah, I admit the prologue is a bit of a mess at the moment, since it was made very early into the development of the game (q1-ish 2022), and not reflective of my newer writing nor the plot of the story š
Unfortunately, I guess first impressions matter! Right now, I am working my head off rewriting and polishing the prologue thanks to yours and everybody else's feedback.
I'd take up your offer of assistance regarding the story, but I encourage you to play beyond the prologue of the game when you have time, so you have an idea of my vision for the game.
Again, thanks so much for the candid feedback and remarks š
The things I love about this game:
The things I don't like about this game:
What I think would benefit this game:
For those who love to read, love visual novels and perhaps Canada or transportation, you will really love this game. Overall, I give it 4 stars.
You can see my demo plays here:
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heey, thanks so much for taking the time to review the game!
Indeed, I am a bit conflicted on the prologue of the game. Itās mostly comprised of my older writing and Iāve considered axing it entirely. Thanks for your feedback regarding the pacing, I too felt it detracted from the main idea of the story, and gave the game a too slow of start.
Regarding your suggestions, both of them exist within the game settings, under different tabs.
You can change the text auto-forward using the slider below āthis is a text sample.ā
You can change the audio of the game in the āsoundā tab in the middle. I will update the UI to make it more obvious thanks to your feedback.
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