The game promises to be quite enjoyable. But I can't help but note that phrases like "cheap pick-up line" sound like a false note in a game with the tag "Historical". Of course, the choice of language style is the right of the author, but as a player I would not be against more classical phrases and terms.
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On one hand, you're correct. On the other, I feel like strictly period appropriate language can feel a little stiff and overly formal, and I don't think it would suit the tone of this story.
I'm going to keep the language as-is out of personal preference, but thank you for the feedback. It's appreciated!