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A jam submission

The Foreman's Plans (OPR Writing Jam 8)View project page

Written for the OPR Writing Jam #8. Mining, Mistakes. Mismanagement.
Submitted by DamphairedDhampyr — 6 hours, 22 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Adherence to the Theme#14.2914.500
Overall#34.0054.200
Concept & Originality#74.0524.250
Flow & Clarity#193.6713.850

Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

Such a poignant ending to this story. I love a good "one line finisher."

I look forward to your future entries. This was a good one!

Submitted(+1)

Uses the term “jaunty angle”.

5 stars.

(+1)

I think I have had a manager or two like this one.

Great! job!

Submitted(+1)

I liked this one a lot! The humor landed for me and it just felt really well-paced, neither cramped nor stretched to meet the length requirement.

Submitted(+1)

Well that junior minor was just rude at the end!

Submitted(+1)

Heh. That dwarf's luck just wouldn't quit. Or lack thereof.