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Really love the style of it and the reversal aspect. 

 I have a few questions / typing notes if you are open to them.

1. Are you intending to use Query as in a question, or Quarry as in an animal being hunted?

2. In the first sentence, is there an "o" missing? The screenshot says "each time you attempt T track..."

3. Have you tried a test print of this? I'd be curious to see how legible the text is, scaling it on screen against a physical card I worry that the text will be incredibly small (as small or smaller than the often mocked Yugioh card efffect text). I've attached a photo example.


This did remind me that I used the wrong template (poker instead of the correct Bridge size) so thanks for that!


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Oh my goodness you're right. Those are some glaring typos. I'll get those fixed

I tried a test print for one of my other entires with the same font size and it was small but reasonably legible. I've tried to pare down the text as much as I could while not making it too ambiguous. 

Thanks for the sharp eyes!