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2 things:

There’s a typo on page 23. It should say “If you fail, you can’t use any of these powers”.
From pages 3 to 17 and 38 to 61 there’s a total waste of paper. Too much borders and white space for very little text. It makes the book heavier than necesary and needs more sheets. I’d suggest to improve it, by making the margins (top, bottom and exterior) smaller and reduce the distance between paragraphs.

Thanks, IGKU! The book is a WIP, and the layout and text are something I’ll surely revisit. Comments like that help me focus on where to improve. Thanks a lot.

Joey V289 days ago(+1)

Here's another opinion. I like the layout. It reminds me of Into the Odd. And as someone with reading difficulty, this is much easier for me to digest. I'll pay for extra pages if it means I can read it.

coolwayink287 days ago(+1)

Thanks a lot for your comment, Joey! I think the white space helps to create focus and gives the layout a more premium look. I’m super glad to know that it resonates with you.

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