Oh Jeez these are a lot! Thanks for taking your time and proof reading the game!
Though I'd like to let you know in advance, probably some wording will be kept as a way of language of the Scriviner. As an amateur writer, I believe the character saying some lines on how they think it is right just makes it feel a bit more than just reading a novel, but listening to someone speak as well. This goes for the same with some characters. The example with Runan jumping to conclusions about his cooking, so with anger present, he wouldn't really make property sentences or rather make it sound worse.
I love all of the characters me and my partner made so I really appreciate you finding all these grammatical errors. Although some of them are intentionally misspelt, majority had been fixed. Also did not know about the rule of ? before !.
Thanks for this! :D
- Roda -
PS. Still trying to figure out the voice bug QuQ