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The Screenshot of the new Bard has a grammatical mistake in it:
Either it should say "You know why the bandit went for the wandering bard? [...]"
or
"Why did the bandit go for the wandering bard? - Wanna know why? [...]"
Because when you use "do go" only the auxiliary verb (do) is changed in its time-form, not the main verb!

You're welcome ^_^

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haha~ well, it was a screenshot when I was creating the bard, (got too lazy to screencap another pic so the dialogue is not in the game. Thank you so much for letting me know though, I'm glad I changed the pun a little in the game :p

Well, it can serve for any English-Learners as a learning experience then <3 Love your Game still, despite a few small mistakes like that in the Text. It doesn't really bother me either. But I don't know how much of a "perfectionist" you are with your story-telling, so I just pointed it out because it's there.

Btw., you have or need any proof-readers? ^_^ I mean, I can't really donate money, but I have quite a bit of my (Life-)time left on my hands these days "thanks" to a couple chronicle illnesses...yet, my wits are still quite intact. ;-)

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hello hello~ thank you so much haha, I really want to improve upon the script so a proofreading would be a great help! if you're able to help, please don't hesitate to head to the discord server~ we can talk more there!