Well, it can serve for any English-Learners as a learning experience then <3 Love your Game still, despite a few small mistakes like that in the Text. It doesn't really bother me either. But I don't know how much of a "perfectionist" you are with your story-telling, so I just pointed it out because it's there.
Btw., you have or need any proof-readers? ^_^ I mean, I can't really donate money, but I have quite a bit of my (Life-)time left on my hands these days "thanks" to a couple chronicle illnesses...yet, my wits are still quite intact. ;-)