Great atmosphere, writing and theme! I was feeling shivers while descending this spiral of psychological horror. Loved the initial choice with the two supreme beings and the breath-taking final outcome. An immensely atmospheric game, congrats! 

I just played it through (again and again, trying as many paths as possible). This game is quite long for the time you had to write it! Great atmosphere and some awesome and twisted descriptions of dreams and visions. I would easily see this expanded into a fully developed long-form game. Best—Giannis from Arcweave.