I know this project was meant to be short, but I would have loved a slower narration, where perhaps instead of accepting the proposal they concentrate on the bitterness of a relationship between the arduous vicissitudes of life. A flying thought, I still really appreciated your work. A lot. Anyway Tremor bottom please, I need it hahaha. Bye!
Can't say for certain, you're the first person to report something like this. If you have one installed, check to see if your anti-virus software is flagging the exe.
sadly i still couldn't install it on my pc but it seemed to work on my phone so i got to play it. It was amazing hope you make more in the future i love the art.
Great art and writing. I liked how the characters were shown through the story, tho I wished I could've seen more of their relationship. The horny scenes were good too, but I guess it's not my thing lol
Ngl this was perfect,I don't know if u plan to continue with this or if it's a short story but to me this was really well done and I just love how, although it's short, still is really sweet and extremely horny, the perfect balance lol I just wish we could see more of their relationship before the last fight when they got together and if this was suppose to just be a short story I would love if u made a longer vn with this theme, it could be like the mc going to start in this fight/porn business and you could fight with different characters and choose different routes depending on who u fight against or something like this.
Is it possible to create a 32-bit version of the exe? I'm stuck on old hardware for now and can't open the game because of it. I think Renpy should allow for this.
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to do that at the moment, as the script currently uses a lot of features of later versions of Renpy. I'll see about creating another version in the future, but it'll be a bit of work to get that out.
Well I'm surprised how I'm good the game turned out to be and I love all of it even the spicy things and then you blush hers then I was surprised the detail 💖😛😋😍🥰👏👏 the chief of the good work and take your time
Ah dang, sorry I'm not the best at trouble shooting this sort of issue, as I don't have an android device to test on. If uninstalling it and reinstalling doesn't help, I'll look into possible solutions when I have the chance.
If you have a moment, please uninstall the existing version of the app and try downloading the most recent version. This one hopefully should work out. If not I'll do some further investigation.
I ABSOLUTELY love the dumb cocky hunk Tremor as I am wanting to learn more about him and his past. (This vn helped cement the desires Elijah wants is into is not so far from my own hahaha)
Wrestling is a top tier kink so it was glad a vn exploring that came along. Excellent art, and the overarching plot works for what it is. The writing for a few of the character moments felt clumsy and pulled me out of the fantasy a bit, but otherwise I greatly enjoyed it!
Finally, I can play a vn that has a wrestling theme (I think this is the first time there is a vn like this)
In my opinion, it need a deeper character introduction. So, the reader can be more sympathetic or something like that to the main or side character.
I know, this is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future. I hope the upcoming story will be better than the current version (not that the current version is bad).
By the way, great job!! I really like this vn. I can't wait for the next update!! XD
The attributions for the tracks are listed in a file in the game folder, titled "attribution.txt"! I'll be updating the credits in a future fix to make these more visible, though.
I'm sure this has fully awakened my "interest" in wrestling. The CG really got me going too. Horniness aside, this VN totally has potential. Hope to see more.
LOL, Most of the voices in the crowd sound kind of muffed, but I'm pretty sure they are speaking in spanish, being the most clearer line "Pinche Basura".
Aside from that, for being short, it was nice reading this. Thank you!
I know this is a lot to ask, but can I ask for an epilogue? I wanna know what happens: If they keep the job or not; if Arlo finds a man; if Theo and Fang wind up... y'know...; how the crowd reacted to that "show~" they put on... and more.
I'll make a more formal announcement about the future of the project when I have a better idea of what I want to do. Short and sweet, I do want to continue, but I don't know what that looks like.
Nope! I plan on keeping this project and any future updates freely available here on itch. If you’re feeling generous, I do have a ko-fi page, but I’m happy if people enjoyed the story.
Frankly incredible. Thoroughly horny, well written, and well drawn as well! Even when they contained kinks that I didn't reciprocate it was still immensely hot! The dialogue is hilarious when it goes for comedy, soul-crushing when it goes for tragedy, and immersive when it goes for engaging. 10/10 if you're on the fence, please download this game! And support the creators if you can!
i thought it was rather enjoyable and an interesting story as well plus the CG that we get were super hot as well hehee great job on making this as well im giving it 5 stars cuz i enjoyed every second of it no matter how jealous i was that MC got to enioy being squished by Tremor lol wish that i could get squished under Tremors butt too and hold on to his trunks like MC haha
Im going to be honest the writing is literally in the format of a wattpad fanfic full of moments of lots of edge, constant over the top sad moments.
While the writing isnt great that was never the point of the vn to be a big lengthy thing (at the moment if it was it would need a lot of work on the writing and would have to be paced differently).
I genuinely think the vn is great and would recommend checking it out because the art is amazing. It paces itself well for what it is! Not to mention the great soundtrack
Thats Vaild in a way(But if i were to make a vn i dont think i want mine to be compared to a wattpad fanfic, prbly why you got downvoted so much, but from thrid party its all your opinion so ehhh)
Iv been in the furry VN community for about 2 years, these horny young adults will down vote and hate on anyone who doesnt praise what they love.
the only reason I compared it to wattpad fanfic was because of a lot of unnecessary edge and over the top drama and instant rushes to horny but…
I didnt really judge this vn on its writing because it wasnt ment to be a long in depth vn which I respect that. And the pacing was just fine for it. I think it has a lot of potential to be something more if you wanted to go down that path (You just might have to cut back on the edge alittle) but overall I thought everything else about the vn was good!
heheehe i get that. i get a better picture of everything now that you explained it better. i get the 1rst part of what you said, bc if your saying something in truth and your own opinion and it doesn't go with others think then peeps start hating.
"these horny young adults will down vote and hate on anyone who doesnt praise what they love" LMAO this is sooo true ! I remember peoples downvoting FBTW and talking shit because "Vulgor isn't gay" or peoples downvoting RtF because the MC is Asexual and to them Asexual = no sex (which is completly false too) and yes you are so right about that point, miss time when peoples were reading VNs firstly for the plot rather than "omg sex sex yum yum hot daddies" parts whitout caring much about the story and only caring about scenes hornines in a whole story, don't mistake me, i love scene sex in VNs and being horny but i love it when it more when it come to a proper time and is paced, not when it's every 5 minutes without any context that is just hadding horniness for horniness tho i'm not talking about this story but about peoples of the Furry VN community in general as i like this story on it's own (PS: sorry if my english is bad or can't be colmpletly understood it's not my main language)
I love that when people talk about people downvoting something because its against their opinion the first thing that comes to mind is fbtw LOL.
As someone who has been in the furry vn community for about 2 years there is a shit tone of storys that have some of the worst writing in the world, but you constantly hear "OMG THE WRITING IS SO GOOD IT MADE ME CRY" despite the pacing is garbage and the story makes no sense. But that one hot wolf daddy makes everyone assume the story is god tier cause hes hot and flirts with the mc 24/7. The community could care less about good writing and more about if the art is good. And tbh most writers in the furry vn community have forgotten that to make a good romance you have to ACTUALLY PACE THE PLOT AND BUILD UP RELATIONSHIPS. And when they do make relationships they are always borderline abusive with stuff like "He wont let me talk to anyone" or another toxic traits.
You were likely downvoted for the tone of your original post. Registering an account to give a backhanded compliment isn't a great look. I appreciate your candor, but I'd appreciate if you were to not continue this thread in the comments here. Thanks!
I have not played it yet, but this kinda matches my expectations anyway because I already know horrorbuns is an artist and developer, *not* a writer. Or at least not primarily a writer.
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Does anyone know when is the next update coming out
Yes. Now
I know this project was meant to be short, but I would have loved a slower narration, where perhaps instead of accepting the proposal they concentrate on the bitterness of a relationship between the arduous vicissitudes of life. A flying thought, I still really appreciated your work. A lot. Anyway Tremor bottom please, I need it hahaha. Bye!
It's a linear romance and romantic and sexual relationships will only be with this 500-pound thorn in the side?
I would encourage you to read the story if you’re curious about what happens.
Eh, intrigued
I love It It Help Me Get My Mine Have A Bad A Day
Did it get updated today?
Sorry for the false alarm there! Just had to reupload the files with a few changes.
I see, It's alright! I am just excited to see more of this visual novel.
Can't wait for this game to get updates!!!
why is it that when i try and download the pc ver it keeps getting removed is it corrupted or smth?
Can't say for certain, you're the first person to report something like this. If you have one installed, check to see if your anti-virus software is flagging the exe.
sadly i still couldn't install it on my pc but it seemed to work on my phone so i got to play it. It was amazing hope you make more in the future i love the art.
Ah dang, sorry that the desktop version keeps giving you trouble, not sure what the cause could be. Glad you were able to check it out though!
Has great potential. Keep it up!
This game is awesome. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen
Great art and writing. I liked how the characters were shown through the story, tho I wished I could've seen more of their relationship. The horny scenes were good too, but I guess it's not my thing lol
Either way, good job!
Ngl this was perfect,I don't know if u plan to continue with this or if it's a short story but to me this was really well done and I just love how, although it's short, still is really sweet and extremely horny, the perfect balance lol I just wish we could see more of their relationship before the last fight when they got together and if this was suppose to just be a short story I would love if u made a longer vn with this theme, it could be like the mc going to start in this fight/porn business and you could fight with different characters and choose different routes depending on who u fight against or something like this.
Is it possible to create a 32-bit version of the exe? I'm stuck on old hardware for now and can't open the game because of it.
I think Renpy should allow for this.
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to do that at the moment, as the script currently uses a lot of features of later versions of Renpy. I'll see about creating another version in the future, but it'll be a bit of work to get that out.
Well I'm surprised how I'm good the game turned out to be and I love all of it even the spicy things and then you blush hers then I was surprised the detail 💖😛😋😍🥰👏👏 the chief of the good work and take your time
I NEED MORE
You did sucha good job Horrorbuns! Love it <3!
On Android it says app is not installed :<
Ah dang, sorry I'm not the best at trouble shooting this sort of issue, as I don't have an android device to test on. If uninstalling it and reinstalling doesn't help, I'll look into possible solutions when I have the chance.
Maybe it's the architecture of your android, can you if your android is 32 bits or 64 bits?
thank you take your time sir
If you have a moment, please uninstall the existing version of the app and try downloading the most recent version. This one hopefully should work out. If not I'll do some further investigation.
thank you and there's no trouble installing the app and again thanks
I ABSOLUTELY love the dumb cocky hunk Tremor as I am wanting to learn more about him and his past. (This vn helped cement the desires Elijah wants is into is not so far from my own hahaha)
Wrestling is a top tier kink so it was glad a vn exploring that came along. Excellent art, and the overarching plot works for what it is. The writing for a few of the character moments felt clumsy and pulled me out of the fantasy a bit, but otherwise I greatly enjoyed it!
I underestimated just how horny a vn can be. Can'r wait for the second update.
Finally, I can play a vn that has a wrestling theme (I think this is the first time there is a vn like this)
In my opinion, it need a deeper character introduction. So, the reader can be more sympathetic or something like that to the main or side character.
I know, this is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future. I hope the upcoming story will be better than the current version (not that the current version is bad).
By the way, great job!! I really like this vn. I can't wait for the next update!! XD
I would love to know the soundtrack songs used in the game! Especially that song after the two decide to do the show. that guitar was super nice!
The attributions for the tracks are listed in a file in the game folder, titled "attribution.txt"! I'll be updating the credits in a future fix to make these more visible, though.
THE ART WAS FUCKING S TIER ON GOD ON GOD :3
Good work all around on this one, it was a nice story and some cool moments too. Loved the final match quite a bit
I love how this fvn has no filler, just a relatively short vn packed with super nice content.
Like, I love the longer fvns but even some great ones sometimes have some parts that are very ‘meh’ in my opinion, but this is just a blast throught!
I'm sure this has fully awakened my "interest" in wrestling. The CG really got me going too. Horniness aside, this VN totally has potential. Hope to see more.
LOL, Most of the voices in the crowd sound kind of muffed, but I'm pretty sure they are speaking in spanish, being the most clearer line "Pinche Basura".
Aside from that, for being short, it was nice reading this. Thank you!
Pfft, are you sure they were saying pinche basura?
Spanish is my native language, so I'm pretty sure that's what I heard :D
Oh, alright
I didn't mean to sound rude.
To be honest, I thought they were saying something else.
Don't worry. You didn't know I speak spanish, so I can't really be mad. More than being rude, you were doubtful. So, I take no offense on it.
Thanks for understanding... People make me out to be condescending and whatnot, so I'm glad someone understands that I'm not trying to be.
I know this is a lot to ask, but can I ask for an epilogue?
I wanna know what happens: If they keep the job or not; if Arlo finds a man; if Theo and Fang wind up... y'know...; how the crowd reacted to that "show~" they put on... and more.
i guess this is only the beginning
Guess so
I'll make a more formal announcement about the future of the project when I have a better idea of what I want to do. Short and sweet, I do want to continue, but I don't know what that looks like.
a furry wrestling sign me up
Awesome concept! Great art and characters too!
Your android brothers request a hide button!
Thanks for the fun VN.
It's on the way! I'm aiming to push a version to include a few fixes here in the next couple of days.
This is ridiculously fun. I absolutely loved the story and dynamic of the two.
Damn
Is there patreon for this
Nope! I plan on keeping this project and any future updates freely available here on itch. If you’re feeling generous, I do have a ko-fi page, but I’m happy if people enjoyed the story.
Frankly incredible. Thoroughly horny, well written, and well drawn as well! Even when they contained kinks that I didn't reciprocate it was still immensely hot! The dialogue is hilarious when it goes for comedy, soul-crushing when it goes for tragedy, and immersive when it goes for engaging. 10/10 if you're on the fence, please download this game! And support the creators if you can!
FWUMP!! more scenes like this please! x3
I like all about this keep going
i thought it was rather enjoyable and an interesting story as well plus the CG that we get were super hot as well hehee great job on making this as well im giving it 5 stars cuz i enjoyed every second of it no matter how jealous i was that MC got to enioy being squished by Tremor lol wish that i could get squished under Tremors butt too and hold on to his trunks like MC haha
This was stressful to read.
I'm being insensitive, I'm sorry.
No, but all jokes aside, I agree with you.
who the hell is downvoting every comment
Good question! Might just disable the feature on here.
parabéns pelo jogo ansioso para a próxima atualização 😃😃😃😃😃
Im going to be honest the writing is literally in the format of a wattpad fanfic full of moments of lots of edge, constant over the top sad moments.
While the writing isnt great that was never the point of the vn to be a big lengthy thing (at the moment if it was it would need a lot of work on the writing and would have to be paced differently).
I genuinely think the vn is great and would recommend checking it out because the art is amazing. It paces itself well for what it is! Not to mention the great soundtrack
Thats Vaild in a way(But if i were to make a vn i dont think i want mine to be compared to a wattpad fanfic, prbly why you got downvoted so much, but from thrid party its all your opinion so ehhh)
Iv been in the furry VN community for about 2 years, these horny young adults will down vote and hate on anyone who doesnt praise what they love.
the only reason I compared it to wattpad fanfic was because of a lot of unnecessary edge and over the top drama and instant rushes to horny but…
I didnt really judge this vn on its writing because it wasnt ment to be a long in depth vn which I respect that. And the pacing was just fine for it. I think it has a lot of potential to be something more if you wanted to go down that path (You just might have to cut back on the edge alittle) but overall I thought everything else about the vn was good!
heheehe i get that. i get a better picture of everything now that you explained it better.
i get the 1rst part of what you said, bc if your saying something in truth and your own opinion
and it doesn't go with others think then peeps start hating.
"these horny young adults will down vote and hate on anyone who doesnt praise what they love" LMAO this is sooo true ! I remember peoples downvoting FBTW and talking shit because "Vulgor isn't gay" or peoples downvoting RtF because the MC is Asexual and to them Asexual = no sex (which is completly false too) and yes you are so right about that point, miss time when peoples were reading VNs firstly for the plot rather than "omg sex sex yum yum hot daddies" parts whitout caring much about the story and only caring about scenes hornines in a whole story, don't mistake me, i love scene sex in VNs and being horny but i love it when it more when it come to a proper time and is paced, not when it's every 5 minutes without any context that is just hadding horniness for horniness
tho i'm not talking about this story but about peoples of the Furry VN community in general as i like this story on it's own
(PS: sorry if my english is bad or can't be colmpletly understood it's not my main language)
I love that when people talk about people downvoting something because its against their opinion the first thing that comes to mind is fbtw LOL.
As someone who has been in the furry vn community for about 2 years there is a shit tone of storys that have some of the worst writing in the world, but you constantly hear "OMG THE WRITING IS SO GOOD IT MADE ME CRY" despite the pacing is garbage and the story makes no sense. But that one hot wolf daddy makes everyone assume the story is god tier cause hes hot and flirts with the mc 24/7. The community could care less about good writing and more about if the art is good. And tbh most writers in the furry vn community have forgotten that to make a good romance you have to ACTUALLY PACE THE PLOT AND BUILD UP RELATIONSHIPS. And when they do make relationships they are always borderline abusive with stuff like "He wont let me talk to anyone" or another toxic traits.
Its kinda sad how furry vns have gotten.
You were likely downvoted for the tone of your original post. Registering an account to give a backhanded compliment isn't a great look. I appreciate your candor, but I'd appreciate if you were to not continue this thread in the comments here. Thanks!
I have not played it yet, but this kinda matches my expectations anyway because I already know horrorbuns is an artist and developer, *not* a writer. Or at least not primarily a writer.