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I love that when people talk about people downvoting something because its against their opinion the first thing that comes to mind is fbtw LOL.

As someone who has been in the furry vn community for about 2 years there is a shit tone of storys that have some of the worst writing in the world, but you constantly hear "OMG THE WRITING IS SO GOOD IT MADE ME CRY" despite the pacing is garbage and the story makes no sense. But that one hot wolf daddy makes everyone assume the story is god tier cause hes hot and flirts with the mc 24/7. The community could care less about good writing and more about if the art is good. And tbh most writers in the furry vn community have forgotten that to make a good romance you have to ACTUALLY PACE THE PLOT AND BUILD UP RELATIONSHIPS. And when they do make relationships they are always borderline abusive with stuff like "He wont let me talk to anyone" or another toxic traits.

Its kinda sad how furry vns have gotten.

horrorbuns1 year ago(+4)

You were likely downvoted for the tone of your original post. Registering an account to give a backhanded compliment isn't a great look. I appreciate your candor, but I'd appreciate if you were to not continue this thread in the comments here. Thanks!

Rengarsitonme1 year ago(-4)

I dont know who you think you are to tell me what I can and cant do, but even the creator said he understood my criticism. So I will continue talking on this thread, sense the creator doesnt have a problem with me

thanks!

horrorbuns1 year ago(+6)

I am the creator, my guy.

Rengarsitonme1 year ago(-3)

Edit: I notice you are the creator and id like to add that saying a vn is having too much edge and over the top drama is valid criticism. Comparing it to a wattpad fanfic in terms of the format of the writing is also valid. If you read my reply you would see I tried to explain it better

I even said that I didnt judge it based on the writing sense it was ment to be quick and wasn’t supposed to have a hard emphasis on story even saying it was paced well for what it is.

then saying that if you wanted to make it into a novel (which it has a lot of room to become one) then you would need to fix some of the writing issues with the story and pace it differently but other then that it has a lot of potential.

I dont know why you call that backhanded criticism, and then ask me to not comment. Im like the only comment of criticism on this form. and I didnt even say your vn was bad.

horrorbuns1 year ago(+5)

Your feedback was noted the first time you posted it, thanks.

Rengarsitonme1 year ago(-3)

Well I understand my point came off a little more hateful then I wanted it to. So I wanted to at least make sure the creator didnt think I was trying to insult his work.

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