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You were likely downvoted for the tone of your original post. Registering an account to give a backhanded compliment isn't a great look. I appreciate your candor, but I'd appreciate if you were to not continue this thread in the comments here. Thanks!

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I dont know who you think you are to tell me what I can and cant do, but even the creator said he understood my criticism. So I will continue talking on this thread, sense the creator doesnt have a problem with me

thanks!

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I am the creator, my guy.

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Edit: I notice you are the creator and id like to add that saying a vn is having too much edge and over the top drama is valid criticism. Comparing it to a wattpad fanfic in terms of the format of the writing is also valid. If you read my reply you would see I tried to explain it better 

I even said that I didnt judge it based on the writing sense it was ment to be quick and wasn’t supposed to have a hard emphasis on story even saying it was paced well for what it is. 

then saying that if you wanted to make it into a novel (which it has a lot of room to become one) then you would need to fix some of the writing issues with the story and pace it differently but other then that it has a lot of potential.

I dont know why you call that backhanded criticism, and then ask me to not comment. Im like the only comment of criticism on this form. and I didnt even say your vn was bad.

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Your feedback was noted the first time you posted it, thanks.

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Well I understand my point came off a little more hateful then I wanted it to. So I wanted to at least make sure the creator didnt think I was trying to insult his work.