Edit: I notice you are the creator and id like to add that saying a vn is having too much edge and over the top drama is valid criticism. Comparing it to a wattpad fanfic in terms of the format of the writing is also valid. If you read my reply you would see I tried to explain it better
I even said that I didnt judge it based on the writing sense it was ment to be quick and wasn’t supposed to have a hard emphasis on story even saying it was paced well for what it is.
then saying that if you wanted to make it into a novel (which it has a lot of room to become one) then you would need to fix some of the writing issues with the story and pace it differently but other then that it has a lot of potential.
I dont know why you call that backhanded criticism, and then ask me to not comment. Im like the only comment of criticism on this form. and I didnt even say your vn was bad.