i think a dylus kissing scene would help a lot and a benignus kissing scene and a torin kissing scene and the king too and
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the character writing is impressive! everyone has a very strong voice and lots of depth. I usually simp for the big bara boys, but Hiro completely stole my heart <3.
as for the plot, this project is looking ambitious AF. Seriously. Each route seems to be working with a ton of different genres and plot threads, which is cool to see, even if it ends up a little muddled sometimes.
excited to read more! (pls be kind to Hiro ;_;)