A short simple experience binded with a very realistic premise!
I really enjoy these types of furry visual novels and you delivered hard, Honestly I cannot wait for what project you have next man awesome work!
I'd like to belive the reason behind the lack of updates is the authors time in fleshing out the world and direction of this novel since the dinner scene introduced a lot of different aspects to the world of avalon and it's landscape it reminds me a lot of Game of Thrones now that dragons are rumored to exist.
I really enjoy the part of the Caelan separating himself from the player which is a breath of fresh air in a player-controls-protaganist dominated genre and in a ironic twist that the blank slate you project yourself onto your name and all frees himself from what you typed in the beginning is pretty clever!
Replaying this chapter made me think more highly of it since it introduced a lot of elements and kept the story progressing, do I think the story is gonna get more faster now? Probably not.
All things considered there so much going on that I hope he doesn't end up writing more than he can fit on his paper so to speak.
The location, characters, and plot are all very unique when it comes to the current lineup of furry visual novels on the site and as for this being your first visual novel you have outdone yourself and created something that will definitely get better over time as the story unravels! Lastly, I took a look at your social and seeing your works put up in display is truly a accomplishment that not many furry artists out there have achieved and it makes me genuinely respect you for creating and sharing your passion to the world <3
You provided a very strong introduction to this series and as a furry enthusiast who loves and watched all of Evangelion this feels like the start of something incredible and amazing! I am sure 100% that this vn is worth the wait, either way you have me hooked! (I also found this in a gay furry collection hahaha I got a better experience out of it!)
Let me just say that the people who made this game are geniuses for creating a game that is unique and different than the rest. In my opinion these endings and mature themes is what make this game powerful and memorable, without the bad experiences we've seen in this game it wouldn't be the same. This was my second visual novel right next to adastra and this one struck a chord within me I love echo and their games!