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The game goes back to the title screen any time you finish the one of the stories. You’re supposed to go back in and read the other stories, then click “finish entry” once you’ve done all four stories. I’m sorry I didn’t make that clear enough. I should have done some kind of tutorial element or some kind of marker that showed completion progress. 

Thank you for the feedback as well. I did put some “wait” commands in there to help the pacing, but I can see why it was a frustrating experience for you. I’ll go back and fix that to prevent that. Thank you for the detailed response!

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Yeah... and I think you definitely want some beats in there to help with pacing and timing... but maybe keep it up and have a "...." between those lines? Eh. idk. All I know is when the box hides completely, I still had my cursor there and thought I could move, so it just became trying to move it constantly to see if I had control back. :P

Also... no worries at all! I'm impressed by how much is here! I'll have to go in and try the other entries now :D 

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I get what you mean, and I think you make a good point. I'll see if I can rework it so it doesn't do that. Thanks again! I really appreciate the time you took to play my game and the help you gave me to make it even better. :)