the translation could be better but decent enough. some part (like the job explanation from main story 2) can be a bit difficult to understand. simple story telling with feelings in it, i like how the songs plays role on giving me the feels while i read the text XD
for insurance sale 1, the scary game sure spooked me haha. sound effect helped to spook me XD i enjoyed the special art too, especially the shaking.
insurance sale 2 is even better than 1! for the question, my answer is.. both actually is good. but i choose 2.