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Things I liked:

  • Clear instructions for what to do next
  • The story is one that keeps me guessing and wondering what’s really going on 

Things I didn’t like:

  • Time resets make sense at first - MC dies, then repeats until they figure out how to avoid it - but later the resets don’t follow this pattern and it’s not clear why a reset occurs
  • Talking to everyone in the room is a simple enough, but the dialog is so bland that it just seems like padding more than giving insight into the characters or advancing the story
  • Grammar issues make it hard to follow the story
  • A scene late in the game fails to fade in, so I couldn’t get to the ending

This seems like a good foundation for a story-based game; it just needs some further refinement to really shine.

Thank you for the review.

I really appreciate the feedback, I will improve it in the next project.

For a black screen at the end of the game, I have already fixed it.

But I can't send the updated game because the game jam activity is not over yet.

Thanks for playing.