I got this game for judging in round 2 for the IGMC. Congrats on making it to round 2!
I feel you have an interesting premise here. The game plays out more like an adventure game where you have to find the items to complete the quest. At the end there is a choice which decides the endings for you as well.
Overall this was a nice short game. If I had to suggest anything its that I wanted the game to go longer, but that just shows how good it was.