Loved the cutscenes! even though the game lacks, well, much gameplay, it still was a nice experience. Dialogue was great, story and atmosphere were also well done. great job!

Indie Game: Payback

First Impression: well, I have no idea what to expect, only Super Meat Boy.

Good Points:

+ cutscene!

+ cute style

Overall: my only complain would be lack of level, it’s more like a movie. But I’m going to give a 9 to it.

LOVED IT! quick minor critiques, there is no indication for controls, for me "n" was the jump button which is a bit odd, and took me a bit to figure that out cuz I had to press every individual key, but I got going pretty quick! Also some camera control would have been nice so it doesn't clip into walls but it works fine as long as you just go forward :P            now: the beginning cutscene was amazing! the camera moves so smoothly! Same with the characters! I totally agree jam is way too short for something like this! But you did a great job in the time that you had and I'd love to see you finish it if you can later :D 

Really good game! I loved the story!