Honestly your comments kind of make me like the project a bit more. If art really was neither of your proficiencies, this is all the more impressive. AS for the text errors, they did not read as "not native" errors, but rather "woopsie I didn't do a second pass on the draft", so great job!
Also psst, a silver fox is a term for a handsome grey-haired man. Tho to be fair the romance novel shirt pulls half the work there XD
If you missed the stream but are still interested, here you go (the descriptionhas the tim where yours starts):