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IMHO

Long lines - shorten.

Short lines - Increase 

Level with a sword. There wos is a very long lines. And there wos is a very short lines.

For the rest, I liked it. good luck.

I did intend for a bit of tense-release design within the levels, so there's tight bits and then relaxing bits but I agree that each are respectively too long and too short, so appreciate the feedback!
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it! :)