E5Burrito hit it on the head: This is a very solid, action-oriented mission that's going to keep players busy dealing with one encounter after another, leading to a tough final boss fight. I really like the new Traits, which are well-connected to the scenario and would make for a fun level up for players coming out of this adventure -- especially if they've messed with the wrong tech in one of the rooms or were exposed to a special item. And random event tables are a huge boon to a ref. Well done!
Minor editing note, for the first STAGE BOSS: "As the helicopter leaves the platform a previously invisible figure is revealsed on the helipad."
And for the last part of the EPILOGUE: "As the team leaves, a pulse of green energy blasts out of the sea platform before it implodes into a wreck of twisted metal and fire."