For the criteria of making a previous game better, you absolutely smashed the competition! As for the game itself, that story got to me. In the beginning I was really questioning the path you were taking for a final game. But it grew on me so much that I had to take a minute after finishing - before I voted. Truly a great job!
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Thanks for your message! I do think I could have structured the beginning a little differently, I made the whole game in a linear fashion so when I got to the hard-hitting emotional end sequence I did realise the beginning is a little "undercooked" in comparison. But overall I am really happy with the message of the game, and happy to hear that it resonated with you!