I ran into something, When you are returning to the village the first night, before Celica joins. "...giving Ashley a chance to talk probably start another war," It would make more sense in saying "probably will start another war". Small thing, but it just seems more right to me.
When do you expect to do a revamp of the earlier stuff? Some of the early banter is still quite funny! ("You got a licence for that snark?" as an example)
It's amazing to me that more than a year later, people are still finding typos I missed in the opening sections lol. I really appreciate it, thank you!
On the revamp... it'll depend a bit on when I can get art for a new girl. I'd say definitely this year is the goal, though. I want to have a strong plan and a clear goal before I start, so I can finish it in one update cycle rather than getting stuck on revamps forever like some games lol.
I'll definitely save what I can in terms of memorable lines and ideas!
