It's amazing to me that more than a year later, people are still finding typos I missed in the opening sections lol. I really appreciate it, thank you!
On the revamp... it'll depend a bit on when I can get art for a new girl. I'd say definitely this year is the goal, though. I want to have a strong plan and a clear goal before I start, so I can finish it in one update cycle rather than getting stuck on revamps forever like some games lol.
I'll definitely save what I can in terms of memorable lines and ideas!