I wish this game was real, it sounds so fun!!!

Sweet game :) I liked the frog-related word play and the graphics were super cute as well. 

That was a short and sweet story. Nice work!

• Thinks I liked:
  • Love the hand drawn art.
  • I appreciate the lesson being communicated through the story.
  • Never seen a text based hyperlink story before. Very unique!
• Things that could be improved:
  • I would have liked to see more branching paths in the story. I think there were only 2 different choices you could take (chat vs practice & duel vs friends).
  • If you are unfamiliar with valorant / LOL then many things in the story can go over your head. Phrases like "girls only play support", "you go to queue up", and talk about ranks would leave someone unfamiliar confused. Maybe find ways to say the same things but make it easier for others to understand.

Nice story and concept. I was definitely rooting for the character to not bother playing the 1v1!

Very nice writing! I enjoyed the story and the artwork, especially all the little frog-related details of the game. Good job!

Very cute game with a great theme! Wise message from Sylvia there: no need to pay attention to things that are not worthy and just enjoy your life.

Love the sketchiness of the arts, I think it fits rather well. It’d be nice to have something playing in the background, but the silence is not so bad.

And lol, poor dude doesn’t have a proper name.