Nice! Dawn is gonna be pissed Sun is dead, though. Maybe talk your way through it? I love the setting/story. The different locations or reasons you have to work with are humorous and make my human body rock with laughter. I don't like 50% fails, but you've made it so it's just a complication instead of a complete and utter failure. Which is very nice! I would play this a bit more openly and not corner my players into just trying to get rid of the body. Maybe a Weekend at Sun's scenario happens?